........uppin this.......

uppin uppin uppin this battle...........................

iight iight yalls lets git some votes in here,......

uppin this battle.................................

wat the freakin hell get some votes in here.......

uppin for votes......................

uppin this battle for votes-----------------------

This was feedback posted for Golden shellz
 

GS took this one in my opionin wit better wordplay, and better personals. No one didnt really have too many good punches in this one, so I couldnt look for that. Both structures was coo, but I think GS took this one easily.
grafh-yo verse was wack to me, i think you should elevate. not battlin in a month isnt an excuse. i felt like yo verse was beyond simple. I wasnt feelin it at all. no hate tho homie
overall-i think gs took this one because his verse didnt put me to sleep, and i seen better wordplay and personals in hsi verse.

v/golden shellz

Voted For: Golden shellz

good battle from both and it was close to call but here it is.

Grafh had a good verse from the start, Nice personal punch wiv good set up and nice metaphor use that hit hard. Then a nice second bar, good metaphor but i wasnt really feeling th punch too much. Third bar was real good, i loved the punch, good personal. Then the closer was cool aswel, ended it nicely. I thought it would be difficult to beat. Especially wiv the flow being real good, a nice read.

Golden Shellz had nice opener, good punch that hit nicely. Good metaphor in this and the second bar too that also worked really well, hard hitting there. "got a computer for only rappin and beatin off" -This was a dope line! Then the closer was dope too wiv a nice bit about hot at hand and campbells soup. That clinched the win for you man.

Well done to both

-shakes head-

lets get some votes iight--------