Voted For: Da_Throwdest

I think overall this was not the best battle i have seen on this site but Da_throwdest won this with more creativity in his punches and hir verse ...

MJGREEn i wasnt feeling your structure or your lack of vocabulary in your punches you need to find your niche and elevate a littlemore withyour punches and also creativeness

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3-4 bars eh....doesnt look like it to me..........

Voted For: Da_Throwdest

yo imma give you this dawg cuz you wrecked him with less words
opener da
multies da
hits da
structure da closer da

nice shit man

yo mj try rapping about something that offends him i bet you have never even met his bitch if he has one any way your fucking stupid for writing that shit

Voted For: MjGrEeN

ok i'm gonna have to say that that MJ green had this...cuz it actually looked like he wrote it

Uppin 4 votes.................honest votes.......will return the favour.

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both yall niggaz suck but...

i'll give it to dis bitch cuz he was a tad bit better

all ya'll niggaz need to work on ur game cuz ya'll WHACK AS HELL DAMN YALL BITHCES SUCK ASS

Voted For: Da_Throwdest

alright, kinda one sided.....

Green, you had some alright punches, but where's the creativity man? you had like one nice bar, and that was the life he don't have one line. You need to work on being more creaitve. your structure, and flow is on point though.

Throw, I've seen you come harder, but you used more creativity, meaning more metaphors, and more thought out punches. You did a good job in this battle, with the flow, and the structure, overall a good drop. No hate to either.

Throw please return an honest vote in my battle. THanks

Voted For: Da_Throwdest

MJ GREEN:
man no hate but i think you didnt try here iv'e seen so much better from you...you didnt have any good vocab here it lacked creativity a bit there was a few good metaphores but nothing so creative you know i just felt it lacked that..but you did have a good stucutre and flow thats good...no hate man

Da_Throwdest
that was pretty good man you elevated alot your vocab was alot bettter then shadows and your stucture and flow is alot better now..the creativty and metas were there seen alot of imagery there was very good verse from you i shoulda been looking alot mroe cause your gettin better...damn good job...

opener: Throw
closer: Throw
metas: Throw
Imagery: Throw
flow: Throw
structure: Throw
creativty: Throw
win/ Da_Throw

Voted For: Da_Throwdest

Mj Green-- I think your grammar is horrible... No hate at all, ... all that shit adds up, and gets real irritating to have to re-write in my head... I think you had a good path on this topic too, but your writing mis-cues really take alot away from your verse....

Throw- Not bad at all, I kind of expected a little bit more fluidity to your verse- but the story and rhymes flowed well enough I think to win you this... your verse really reminded me of being a teen-ager for some reason... good shit... Vote Da_Throwdest.