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Critic 03-03-05 08:31 AM

Voted For: Buck.Shot

Dame Dame Dame, Back to normal business then Dope
you killed this girl,....

Alright BQ,.... Nice opener,.. middle u kinda losted it,..
close was weak but I liked the ridicule less bit lol...
flow was ok but pretty basic,.. need to up that up
girl and get a bit more complex.. Punches was alright
but I didnt really see any personals to add effect...

Buck come nice,.... Start, middle and close was all
even,.. Flow was nice,.. punches hit hard with some
nice personals,... good battle by both but buck had
the better verse.

Vote Buck

Spektikul 03-03-05 01:18 PM

This was feedback posted for Black Queen
 
lol @ no Establishment votes...

I like to see our crew has been intimidating kats...

P.S. Black Queen took this easy, the final votes will show.

Peace out Fuck.Shot.:thumbup:

Dirty Nigga 03-04-05 07:47 AM

Okay then..........
Or, i dont want your crew voting because y'all vote against me in every battle? fuckass, get out of my threads you little lowlife bum

Uppin for the win :D

Mad Dog 03-04-05 09:23 AM

Voted For: Buck.Shot

Buck.Shots Verse

Says I'm whack, but she followed me into The Crew (Jury)
Nobody likes ya rhymes, they just wanna Screw!
^ basic could be better really flow good though

I'ma hit the nail on the Head, n make ya Wig Flip
This tranny got a Bigger dick than Skriptz!
^ Can see why you mentioned Skriptz name now punch was meh

Chubby Cheeks, lookin like a Young Oprah
Bitch so fat.......
....They got literally ''put it in ya Belly'' when they Poke-ya!
^ lol that was funny flowed aight as well

Claimed i never beat a Vet when her Record aint hit Eleven
Bout ta open a chain of Stores in ya Honour...
.......''Legs Open TwentyFour-SEVEN!''
^ lol punch good nice steady diss

She went from Lil Nae, then claimed ta be a 'Queen'
Her rhymes wouldnt ''Shine'' if ya coated 'em in Window Sheen!
^ Nice punch good flow

Just so you know, I enjoy the Hate, an It gives me Wood
So go 'head n admit it, You'd sit on my Face if you Could!
^ not really a diss you started picking up then went down again

I'ma take you on a stroll thru the Hood...
....Let my Boys run a Train
Only reazon she think she ''Wise'' dissin me is.....
......She Constantly Givin' BRAIN!
^ Nice closer good diss nicely picked up at the end

Black Queens Verse

Comparing ur text to mine is like comparing playboy to the bible
Cause Buck just a cheap substitution for something desirable
^ Nice opener good rhyme diss good

No satis..faction, deep breathe and pause to effect,
He lost so many battles he still dont think dat he whack
^ Don't rhyme...all i got to say on that

But if you wanna go for rapping, i'll take you out in sections,
Voting is extremly one sided, like a cuban prez election
^ Not a diss jus a regular punch sorry

But if you wanna try and win, by all means go for it,
Or you can be a bitch and hide in a hole, gopher it
^ lol wordplay nice good bar lol

Hold the glamour now, pretend like you a movie big fuckin star,
Cuz after these hits, your head will be seeing moving stars
^ lol punch could be mad better this was kinda kiddie

ya lines ridiculous, like mute cows, i herd you were dumb
i could "ridicule less" but that wouldn't be as much fun
^ Closer was aight wordplay on herd but i weren't feelin it as much

Overall
As far as consistancy goes i think Buck.Shot won this more disses than Queen but both definitely didn't shine in this battle...3 days for an RTF or ima remove this vote...

Dirty Nigga 03-05-05 06:10 AM

Uppin this..........................................

Dirty Nigga 03-06-05 12:51 PM

Uppin this here.....................................

Dirty Nigga 03-07-05 07:29 AM

Uppin ''Buck.Shots merkin'' :D
Crunk, crunk............

M-Eazy 03-07-05 07:29 PM

This was feedback posted for Buck.Shot
 
i think buck took this one. black, i wasnt feelin yo verse that much, it was kinda off, but you still got fire. prolly the best femcee on tha site from what i seen.
buck, yo structure was off homie, but other than that, hard punches, and wordplay

but, i aint guna vote on this, cause ima expect you to RTF, n that establishment pussy might get mad...


good drop tho

~1~

Dirty Nigga 03-08-05 11:51 AM

who the hell is the establishment pussy?
?????????
lol...

Uppin this

Black Queen 03-08-05 04:53 PM

^^^gay............................................ ......

Dirty Nigga 03-08-05 04:59 PM

lol, i'm gay?
dont be mad cause ''Buck.shots merkin'' aint goin too plan, its 2-0, would be 3 if J voted, an apparently your merkin me? lol, an i'm gay becvause i had better lyrics than you?
guess that makes you a dyke then?
ahhh well, i aint gonna complain...

Black Queen 03-08-05 05:31 PM

wat the fuck kinda comeback was dat every fuckin thang dat comes out yo mouf gay you blacklist so many ppl talkin bout d/r wen all dese votes are dickride and everybody says so

Dirty Nigga 03-09-05 08:25 AM

i blacklisted 'da throwdest' an he couldnt vote on this battle anyway, an the establishment, but aint that your crew?
da fuck is your problem, pull ya skirt up little momma, you got murderd

Black Queen 03-09-05 07:46 PM

you dume ass how i get murdered da fuckin battle aint ova yet boo so...........shut up wit dat shit dumb dumb

Dirty Nigga 03-10-05 09:31 AM

^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Love you too :D

Uppin this


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