uppin this shit

Uppin this battle.
Yo evo. Why hate votes against u?
I'm takin what I've bin dealt.
Keep them comin people.

Voted For: riddlemethat

riddlemethat- decent drop your gonna get this one because i didnt get fuck'n lost half way through your rhyme... i'll explain in his// but yea up your vocab .. but i thought u had some half decent lines .. by far the funniest one was.."You the Will Hung of rap, and the midgit of basketball//
The arthritis of athletics and the wart of genitals//" that shit made me laugh o yea take off the //"<-- at the end its pointless

7/10

evo.. damn man your structure was all over the place haha.keep it simple. your things didnt match .. i read it twice. and i understood your punches but damn man loosen up on the structue.. over all though your comp had harder punches and personals thats why he is gett'n my vote.. i did like your opener though

vote..//riddlemethat

rtf its in the sig

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o yea forgot to say the link is in my sig ...honest votes only pl

uppin this piece

Voted For: .Evolution.

.Evolution. - Good spit you had a good flow, and some good wordplay with alright punches.
6/10

riddlemethat - Your shit was just rappin' to real punch lines or wordplay, some shit didnt rhyme, work on it.
4/10

RTF
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=179781

uppin this battle

Uppin this battle people!
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Voted For: .Evolution.

wow this was one sided... good job evolution.. u came nice punches.. flow was nice the whole way thru... your structure could use some work.. but the punches and flow is what gave u this battle... some nice personals in there too.. good job evolution gets the vote.. pz..