holy fuck...a rapper who can sing...rare..i always enjoy ur voice n flow,beat is fire,presence is bangin...singing is almost good enough to were i almost don't belive it's the same dude...nice topic good delivery

tight shit once again

dawg u need to enter American Idol.. lmao nah just playing.. but this was one of the songs u actually feel in ur heart.. this is really dope man.. lyrics is straight the whole way through the whole song.. your flow fell off once in the first verse and that was it.. the beat is real nice.. and it actually compliments ur singing.. and dawg for your first time singing on a track this is nice.. i dont care what cali and them say. ur singing voice aint bad.. good job on this.. im puttin this on a cd.. pz..

Uppin for more feed

make sure your leaving feed on other tracks... I noticed you've left feed on 2 tracks since January... -- ima take a 8 hour nap and I'll hit this w/ some feedback... 1

hahaha...i was gonna use this beat, but decided against it

umm...singing is ok...

i like the flow on this...on point...lyrics were good...rhyme scheme was good...but you could have flipped the multies better


your pronunciation of words could have been crisper...but the delivery was nice


good track


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Let's break this down...

Concept: you can start bitching and say this type of song has been done over and over again which is true of course but you can't deny the sense of reality in the lyrics. The rawness, the "in your face" attitude...how can you not love this? Had a sort of helpless vibe (especially in the hook,crying out for somebody,everybody,anybody..." to explain why it has to be like that) and yet a feeling of strength over it. This was so pure, straight spitting from the core, own life experiences that many people can relate to. You managed to paint a picture so close to reality in your listener's head. Props for that...

Vocals: kinda surprised me with the singing, may not have been from top quality but still, it's better than many other 'so-called' singers. Your deep voice is so smooth,on hook as well as on verses. I have listened to it quite a few times because it takes a while to get used to you singing. The more I listened to it, the more I liked it. Hook is catchy as well, easy to sing along and it gets in your head pretty fast. The vocals on the intro were good, you stayed quite consistent with them throughout the whole song.

Beat and Flow: definately feeling this beat, brought it out quite well. Flow only fell off just a little in first verse but had it on lock for the rest of the song. Can't really give any bad comments concerning this, beat is quite personal I guess...you either like it or you don't :)

Emotion: I mean the way you brought the lyrics to life, the way we hear them coming out of your mouth. I felt the emotional value of the lyrics was clearly present in your deliverance, you managed to spit it emotional yet strong. You made us feel that what you're saying is real and nothing to play with, didn't fall of once in my opinion. Stayed very consistent with the emotion...

Everything blended in quite good, no bad comments on the mixing. I do enjoy listening to you sing, don't need to get someone else to do it in my opinion. I listened to it several times because this is (one of the) best songs on RV at the moment.

Yup, Triple's back for sure...and how...

DQ

Dope shit..

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Had to listen to it twice but I'm off the phone now..

Shit sounds dope as usual.. Lol I swear that voice is crazy deep man.. I gotta ask do you try and make it deeper than it really is when u rap?

Singing is pretty tight.. Sort of reminded me of lincon park too.. You dont sound like you when you sing.. But anyway, theres not much advice I can give you since your prolly better than me at the moment at mixing and delivery.. But I did enjoy listening to the track bro.. Good shit..

i liked this ide bump it in the whip im actually very fond of the singing i think it brings it together then u bring that deep ghetto soundin ryme style and it meshed pretty solid it seems like ya took ya time on this one and payed off homie goodlooks

Yo what up dawg, long time no listen. Yo so i like the fact you tried singing, but I suggest using a nice little r&b babe in the future, just not your stilo. lyrics is tight, definitely feeling this song and the beat was nice. Keep the hot shit coming. Get at me dog, peace........................

YEAH YEAH im feelin this tha tha intro wazz hard to hook is good i see u mixin much betta get at me >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>DI

upping for my boy....

aight i listened to this a few nights ago, Triple N.. i didn't leave feed tho.. i liked your vocals they sound the best so far on this site.. and lyrically this was plain real and down to earth.. the beat played it's part and your flow was on point. and you had good emotion in this track also.. we need to collab sumtime, i'mma get at ya aight
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real tight song be..but damn now that i hear you singin it sounds as if you try real fuckin hard to sound wit a deep voice when you "rap" na'mean?..its like damn lol most cats use their regular voice..but thats all you..but back to this track..shits fire though be..im feelin it..most def some shit i can listen to i'll download this be...holla at me for a collab if you ever down son 1ne...

he does have a natural deep voice, he fuckn can make himself sound like anything... ANYTHING lol