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woooooot woooooooooot... big invektive wrecks it on some crazy shit.. this was pretty nice the whole way thru.. i was feeling it good job..... the topic is kinda weird.. but u got the job done.. and im a lil nigga so im not typing anymore.. pz bitch.. lol

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im feeling it maybe you coulda used better vocab but the stucture is super good the flow is dope and i liekd the metas and creativty you had the way you said how if mc's drop wack n shit that was dope the way you said shit and converted shit to metas it was dopiness yo keep doin that ish i wanna read more igh, pz

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