^Thanks man...good to see people actually voting on a topical battle for once :thumbup: and fully explaining their votes as well.

Upping this for some more...favor will be returned

DQ

Ya, kinda wish eph had touched my verse a little and told me how to get better, but ya. Good job Drama, I'm sorry I had to come as weak as I did.

.....Uppity up up! I liked your verse man.......

DQ

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Whooooooooo...woot woot.....

Up it goes... :thumbup:

DQ

This was feedback posted for Drama Queen
 

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Voted For: Drama Queen

Drama Queen:

Very good piece. From start to end you stayed consistent. The story line seemed so real. Like reading a passage from a novel. You kept everything together with your vocabulary and emotion which is always a plus.

Architect:

Also a very good verse. I felt your piece had a bit more creativity, but you lacked in other areas. You were pretty consistent throughout your piece. The ending was very good and connected the piece a bit more.

Imagery: I would have to say DQ. She used more descriptive terms and she got deep into certain aspects, which arch didnt do as well

Emotion: I would also have to get this to DQ seeing as her verse was more of an emotional piece than was Arch's.

Creativity: Well Arch got this one for the fact that he came with a different view that has rarely been used, while DQ came with the idea of death.

Vocabulary: After reading DQ's verse i thought she had it but then i read Arch's and realized they ere tied in this area.

Enjoyability: I would say DQ got this part. She made her verse an easy read but yet still made it complex, while Arch made his easily readable but stayed in a simpler form.

Overall Vote: Drama Queen

But good topical pieces from both of you.

Please return the favor in any battle in my sig.