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Voted For: Judicial
vocab: gotta give judicial the nod here. multi's were there and rhyme scheme was kept in tact, lines were a bit stretched though. medicine, you need to elevate in this area. your vocab was simple and thus your structure was also simple. punches: simple structure with weak punches doesn't do well in battles. judicial takes this easily... wordplay was good, creativity was there, and punches hit hard. medicine you had some good attempts, but the simple vocab, structure, and lack of wordplay weakened this verse majorly. overall both guys gave a good effort but judicial just had the harder hitting verse and so he gets my vote. return the favor guys links in sig. |
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Voted For: Judicial
vote = judicial consistent with tha name flips throughout...pretty direct, although none of tha punchz were that hard. also injections doesn't really rhyme with contaceptives...not in my accent anyway. medicine..except for tha first line, your verse could have been to anyone. apart from that it was ok..a little simplistic, could have done with dissin judicial a bit harder |
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Voted For: Judicial
Judicial Had Betta Punches..He Won..I Don Feel Like Writin It Out.. |
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