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shit was okay...
flow hea was not good, make it longer vocab, u need to up that shit there structure hea u need to work on that overall it wasnt wack, barely, but i'll give u a 4/10 |
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good peice... i would liked it more if the lines were longer but you got the point across, and not really anybody else has been trying to do open mics like this... veyr toy soldier-ish... 7/10.. keep the sick shit comin
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Shit was good I liked what you talked about. Structure was so was the vocab I think you could of came harder but it was still good. 7/10
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a o that was dope it was an okay flow thank for tha message on my rhyme dawg
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