Voted For: Lil C

Opener - Lil C, Jets didnt compare to hers.
Closer - Lil C, Jet trailed off into words rather than lines at the end.
Punches - Lil C, Jets werent as creative at all.
Personals - Jet, had more.
Metas - Lil C, Jets attemps were weak.
Multies - Lil C, Jet had only like 1 sorta.
Vocab - Lil C, look at Jets...
Structure - Neither, wasnt feeling either.

Areas of Improvement:

Carson - Not to be a jackass, that was garbage yo. As you can prolly tell I wasnt feelin your verse at all and I am 100% positive that Im not the only kat that feels this way. The polls will show. I think you def. need to fix your structure. For starters lose the ........ at the end of ya lines. Next, make them longer. Also try making your punches funnier - metas usually help in the comedy area. And that vocab needs to be fixed, I mean your most tech word was oompa loompa. damn. I think you need to elevate in the right direction....up. Either that or stick to audio kid.

Lil C - Dope verse. But not flawless. I see that you are new so I will give you some pointers for your next battle that I want you to use. So listen...you dont have to number your lines, lose that next time. Also If you are going to have your lines that long in your battles I suggest changing your font size to font size 1. This is so that it all fits into the same line nicely, cause your bars look too crammed up and extended. And iunno, unless your feelin them try using a comma instead of those ~'s. I think if you listened to what I just told you, in your next battle it will make you sound more like a rook instead of a newb when you spit. So remember those things and good job on this win.

V/Lil C.................................................

please RTF...link in siggy.....

Wow.....at 26-4...

u figured u would see....

no personals and played as meti4's wit ancient wordplay....line after line.

Guess not....
Thats why ur text....LMAO. at this joke.....
I shouldnt even have 1 vote against me....

But its Text....so I guess inexperience wins.

Voted For: CarsonJet

CarsonJet
structure is good.. flow is on target.. no multis.. wordplay is decent enough.. some of your punches connected.. some were just gay though.. decent personals..

Lil C
structure isnt very good.. almost all of your lines are stretched.. flow fell off due to the stretchness.. you had a few multis.. attempted wordplay.. but most of it was just garbage.. a few, at best, of your punches connected.. no good personals..

Overall
Lil C had more multis.. CarsonJet had the better structure.. the better flow.. better wordplay.. more connecting punches.. and better personals.. so basing off of that.. CarsonJet swept the floors with this dude..

VOTE - CARSONJET

Please hit up the link in my sig..

ROFLMFAO @ the polls..

And then these dudes wonder why nobody likes to text on this site..

Bunch of dr and lack of knowledge of what a good punch is..

3-2....I cant believe this.

O yeh...I forgot....Im on my audio name.
Maybe if I switch to my old text battlin name I'll get those DR's.....

Seriously this sites stupid....
Same people that say my text suck worship my text alias......

3-2.....LMAO..uppin.

wtf this a fucked up system, I voted for carson wtf???

Lil C, you had a good verse, but your not good enough to battle vets yet, carson, good verse, the any degree line was a great personel, I can tell you didnt put effort, but watch it, cuz you didnt staright kill her, you merely beat her by a bit, Lil C you did good, keep elevating yo, Carson had some better punches, his personels connected mad, you have to work on your meta's though lil' c perfect those and you should be good.

v/ carson

tell strobe to make this count.....

Voted For: CarsonJet

Lil C
whoa man you need work on ya shit the stucture was ripped my eyes off there sockets the punches were played alot some forced rhymes and just not much creaivty i wasnt feeling the whole concept you gave to disssing carson and why would you number each line thats wack, take that off man honestly. work on them punches and personals pz, also you shouldnt have to write so much lines to win a battle that your gonna lose, no hate

Carson
well of coarse you took this one with ease like the kid had no chance Carson now equals my white rapping buddy hes so dope, the punches were flawless liek you nocked him out with a 2 by 4 yo, i was feeling yours alot more, you got my vote for being better all around pz

RTF in my battle with A_M_H peace links in the sig 1

Voted For: CarsonJet

good battle yo, just cheekin tha polezzzzzzzzzzz...