yo dis was da corniest shit i ever heard.you talkin like u a superstar and i dont even know ya name/acting like u bagpipez or somebody like that.yeah u should take ur own advice and end ya 7 month career u dueschbag.peace bagpipez is outtie 5000

This was aight nothin to spectaular you flow was alright kinda shaky in parts, your vocab was on point for what your topic was about and everything else pretty much fell into place i would give this a 7/10 coulda been better coulda been worse ya know but overall good job man .

Check my open mic out Godly if you could peace