Voted For: Cincanatus

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whoa iw asnt really feeling your punches try uppin and usin a lil simiples more often and using some better creativty and up to a few metas in there as well, the rest of your verse was pretty good, great flow no forced rhymes i liked the rest just try uppin them punches a lil more pz

Fatal
i was feeling that ish, tight punches very good damn stucture and flow no forced rhymes i was really feeling the punchlines tho made the verse stand out and creaitvty was flawless keep doin that ish and you'll see some sooner collabs with me coming. pz

VOTE: Fatal Lyriks

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affinity. this is me hatin... your a fag, he hardly even had a punch in his battle. your just a cock banger who loves d/r

Voted For: Cincanatus

Openor=Fl Good Wordplay And Decent Punch
Punches=Fl Had More Hard Hiting Punches
Multies=None
Wordplay=Fl Couple Lines Had Wordplay
Vocab=None
Structure=Fl Pictures Wass Stretched
Personals=None
Closer=None They Both Wass Laccing

Fatal Came Harder In His Verse He Put More Effort Into It He Had Some Ok Punches And Wordplay And His Wass Easier To Read................

/v Fatal Lyrikz

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records officially mean nothing on this site... everyone dickrides

.....uppin........for....the....hell....of....it..

...............uppin.............................. ....

i love to up......................

man, i dont know... if you didnt have pac in ya sig i would be hatin on you mad for that vote. this sites for elevatin, a vote that short aint helpin shit. honest votes get returned(sig) since i did win this battle its honest enough, but das weak at best.