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Damn it man. Why does this have to be a marathon??!?!!?

sorry dex, prolly my fault
I asked RV to get rid off the bullshit votes,

Arch

i admit some of these are stupid non-explained voted but this battle gonna be open for ages i think -just like most battles nowadays

yeah, sorry didn't think about it like that,
it shoudn't be this way tho
dammit whats it take to produce a few honest votes?

Voted For: Dex

Dex

D X, the degenerate, dweeby first name Archie
read on and get put back in ya hutch starsky!
Not to bad...6/10
You getting terrorised without much of a fight
Is obvious as day a with no light is really a night
Eh...could have been better...6/10
My games tight, like you in ya sister jenny’s shoes
still Rocking pics of Dragonball Z at age twety two!
That was a dope punch....8/10
This “shogun” pisses his pants at showed guns
“im actually a herb” should be his new slogan
Pretty good...emjoyabale...7/10
Honestly pal, this beating came without hate
Easy as powdered parmesan cheese on the grate
Word...nice punch...7/10

Overall: 34/50 = 68%



archieDX

enter the arched darkness, cocked and ready to start this
shit, I spit like a full clip, manc niggaz straight heartlesss
Self glorification...:nono:...4/10
lets start this, so you need money? no need tobeg*
or bust jokes to young folks, i think your pulling my leg
Not that hard of a punch...6/10
steppin to this, can get you fucked like forty clitoris
and my lyrics cut deep, like knife beef, or fightin fists
Once again...self glorification...:nono:...4/10
give a fuck? i wish a did, im a danger to your kids
like micheal J, but not as gay, and not up on a bid
Micheal Jackson punches are so fuckin' played...5/10
englands nightmare, im the riff raff, i'll swipe a man's gash*
fuck her twice, JD and ice, then kick her outta my gaff
Once again...self glorification...:nono:...3/10
dont get me vex dex, merc'ed* u so who the fucks next?
got bruising and contusions, but i only dropped in text
I don't feel like posting the self glorification line...3/10

Overall: 25/60 = 42%



Vote: Dex


Return the favour please with an honest vote...the link is in the sig for my battle against Tony Green.

Voted For: Dex

interesting

ima have to go with dex on this one

archie...you started off your verse, first couple of bars, and didnt even really diss him....then when you got into your punches...they were played or or weak...and you do alot of self-glorifying, which is bad....had a good personal in there i thought....but your verse overall was plagued with bad vocab, poor wordplay, and incosistency...elevate dude...no hate, but you came really weak in this one

dex...not bad, not your best, but you stayed consistent in theree, had some decent punches...personals were blah...nothing speical....but you had some good wordplay...vocab could be better...but overally, it flowed better, structure was great, you took this one with harder punches....oh, that dragon ball z one, haha, made me laugh....so, yeha, dex gets my vote

v/dex

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This was feedback posted for Dex
 

checkin polls lol at name archie nice comix

we need to close this i think............................................. .....

meta4 is quite gay isn't he?

.................................................u ppin...................................

Voted For: Dex

This battle was okay... I've seen alot more better lines from you dex then this shyt..

archiedx: Dude, its called stretched lines!! Learn how to not use em.. i hate readin shyt like that, its hella hard to understand the lines.. and next time have better structure.. Your punches we're really hard to catch, n wen i caught em, they still we sorta wack, so elevate on that shyt..

dex: LoL, ur verse was pretty good, very simple, but still very creative and alil originality added to it.. You should try to use vocab, but for reg. battles like dis, it really ain't that much needed, especially wen ur punches are pretty strong.. All I need to say for you is think of more punches for futre battles..

vote: dex