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-   -   Week 9 Hardcore Champion (3-0) Direkt Threat Vs (3-1) Dalyricalwhiz (http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=18094)

Massive 08-03-02 04:35 PM

BREAKDOWN::
 
DALYRICALWHIZ::



ya name should be philly, cause ya lifes at stake(steak)
want beef?, i'll serve u a steaming hot plate

NOT LIKEING THIS OPENER,WASNT HARD HITTING OR EFFECTIVE,THE LIFES AT STEAK WASNT REALLY DOING IT FOR ME,NOT TOO SURE IF YOU SAW MY LIFE AT STEAK LINE BEFORE,BUT IT WAS WAY MORE EFFECTIVE THAN THIS,BUT NEED TO WORK BETTER ON LINES LIKE THIS IT WILL COME



plot on ya block while i pop thangz off my waist sealin ya fate puttin 2 holes in ya face
hybrid,......nuttin but 2 hoes in my face

NOT REALLY LIKEING THIS,DIDNT REALLY CLICK TO ME,BUT YOU KNEW WHAT YOU WERE TALKING ABOUT


direct no kinda threat......like little kids with shanks,
lyrical disgrace.......u non human, u more stupid than a one legged man ina foot race

NOT BAD


u aint untouchable fam, but unfuckwitable's increditable dickryder.... laying inbetween his legs
co-signin his threads, this nigga thinkin he ill.......the whole time doctors givin em prescription meds

OK,NOT TOO EFFECTIVE,OR HARD PUNCH


so actually u ill, just not lyrically inclined, so why try this? , hurt this herb, dianosed wit wack-I-tis
i plus what u minus, so nigga mind this, punish u both on one battle, so the sum is divided

OK,NOT BAD AT ALL,STILL NOT HARD OR EFFECTIVE


infact u need a ghost writer to battle me, but u can't afford one wit ya micky-d's salary
so i guess u really got beef, not on the streets, but in the store grillin the meat-

NICE SETUP MADE ME LAUGH,WASNT A GOOD COUPLET CAUSE THE PUNCH WAS REALLY WEAK


crushing ya element with pistols, until ya image aint seen
eating ya wack raps like 29 cent burgers with cheese

OK,NOT HARD THOUGH

hybrid?! it should be more like hybernation this win'er(winter) puttin u niggaz to sleep
so bear with me, or bare witness, wreck u direckty, my text killin ya writtens

NOTHING SPECTACULAR OR HARD OR EFFECTIVE HERE,NOT REALLY FEELING IT EITHER


beef wit techs, hittin everythang, even the kittens, u spittin? this kid gotta be kiddin
only thing u spit is saliva, cause u retarded, non survivor, my barz got u sporting black n white attire

COOL


my desire, dead-u-on-da-docks-for-da-dolo
leave ya stance unorthodox, like hi-deo nomo, nigga u strait gay, a -hetero-homo


BLAH AT THIS ENDING NOT GOOD MAN


DIREKT THREAT

Bruise Spitting! Key At Deadline, You'll Know Who's Missing-
DLW Will Lose Bitching! I'll Rip This Cat Like Movie Tickets-!

GOOD OPENER,MOVIE TICKET PUNCH SORTA PLAYED,SHOULD OF FLIPPED IT BETTER THOUGH


Sit And Pray; On Regular Day's Direkt Makes An Ass His Of Prey-
Try To Split-And-Bail...I Eat DLW Like Breakfast;His Minute Maid-

OK,NOT HARD AT ALL


Claim Heads Severed; Direkt Has Kenetik Heat Like Lead Sweaters-
Said ForEver;Your Raps Are Like Aputated Legs, It'll Never Get Better-!

DECENT HERE


Flow Is New;Could It Be True That DLW Blows Dudes? I Told You-
Fagget Is Like Windy Season In The Forest;He's A Breeze To Go Threw-!

EHHE FUNNY SHIT HERE,NICE


Rip My Lungs;I'll Still Breathe Fine! Kid Bite's Lyrics, But I Key Mine-
Only Situation He's Ever Clocked Kid's Is Teaching Them To Read Time-!

NOT FEELING IT


Slow Learner;Claims To Be Swifty, Call Him A Moinsted Jerker-
Fuck Your Noise;Im Gonna Serve Ya'! Talk Shit And I'll Poisen Your Burger-!

AGAIN FUNNY,NOT HARD HITTING THOUGH


Honest Opinion, Your Wack I'll Say;He Loves Unfuckwithable! I Laugh At Gays-
Paths Astray...Internet Life Is Like The Sun;You Only Shine Half The Day-!

NOT BAD


DaLyricalWhiz The Illest? Read My Verse; I'll Sharply Demenstrate-
Discard What He Says! Im Sperm In A Condom; Hard To Penetrate-!

OK,NOT A HARD HITTER BUT COOL



Verse You Can't Hear, Do I Got To Sign It? Burn Your Irisis;Now Your Blind Kid-
'Ill'; Shall I Define It? Can't Fuck With This Ill Type Member...Respect Hybrid-!

OK ENDING NOT HARD OR EFFECTIVE,BUT GOOD


UMM BOTH HAS CAME BETTER INTHE PAST,I THOUGHT DALYRICALWHIZ CAME OK,HIS VERSE WAS IFFY TOO ME,NOT TOO MUCH HARD SHIT,NOTHING REALLY STOOD OUT TOO ME,DIREKT THREAT HAS CAME BETTER IN THE BAST ALSO,BUT I FELT EDGED THIS BATTLE OUT,HE CAME WITH A BETTER VERSE I FELT


VOTE DIREKT THREAT

Direkt-Threat 08-04-02 12:04 AM

Umm, to the first cat...this shit was keyed, and if you think I suck, battle me. -Bitch!

Massive 08-04-02 12:48 AM

THIS FUCKING SUCKS,NOONE VOTES ON SHIT WTF

YOU BOTH GET A WIN...IT WAS TIED CAUSE MY VOTE AND COMETAPHORTUNE VOTES ONLY COUNT


DIREKT THREAT- 4-0 HOLDS ON TO HARDCORE CHAMPIONSHIP



DALYRICALWHIZ- 4-1


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