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Voted For: C.A.L.I

'Military Minded'?all the troops in iraq you home on the internet
You get smoked and stomped out........
you the text version of cigarettes!!
~lol, nice punch~

'Intelligence''Artifical' crews dumb dudes pretending they bright
Cuz even if i get behind youll still be below me like fender lights
~aight~

Your only dope lines was coke lines and those went in ya nose
Ya audios sounding like stuttering retards basically no 'flowz'!!
~good, althoug i think there wuz a punch here i didnt git~

My 'Methods' vastly 'Superior' to yours just check my status
You going down like divers with weights on in metal jackets!!
~nice multie~

Fuck rapping this 'lyrical' pimp slapping how i whore this kid
Double ya wins!!...sad thing is you started before i did!!
~lol, nice ending~

lyricalflowz, ur shit didnt really have any punches, and wen it did, they wuz kinda stupid, lol, no hate

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Voted For: lyricalflowz

oh shit this was a good battle.
cali-i think u couldve had this one. it went down to tha last few barz, but now i gota break it down, cause i dunno.

opener-LF hard personal
mettas-cali i think u came harder in this category
punches-LF I THINK you got this one
personals-LF u got this one too. shit was funny
creativite- tie
closer- CALI

THERE IT IS...lf took this one. LF, yo verse was clean. u came off wit this one. i think you lacked structure tho. u should work on that. and yo closer was kidna off too. but other than that, i felt you took this.
cali-you had some hard punches. but i dont htink they were hard enough. i think u should work on the personals in your next abttle. but other than that, yo verse was clean, but not good enough

no hate.overall this was a good battle, and a close one, but i think LF took it..


and PLZ RTF on LAST battle link in sig.


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This was feedback posted for lyricalflowz
 

........................checkin polls...............

Voted For: C.A.L.I

lyricalflowz: Flow was pretty good. Same with structure. Punches werent that great and personals didnt hit too hard. I seen better from you.

C.A.L.I: Metas and wordplay higher quality than 'flowz. I felt punches were hittin harder despite lack of decent personals... Usin names of his crew n shit aint really hit hard to me.. Flow was fine, same with structure.