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Oz™ 03-11-05 05:11 PM

Voted For: J-Money

with as many votes as i get, cats gon "hate to see me gone"
people wouldn't vote for your shit if this was "ratemypoo.com"
ight...that was just discusting....3/10
you claim to be pimpin, id say its out of your reach
the only time girls pick up shellz is when they playin at the beach
lol...damn...that was pretty good..couldve been worded better..6/10
ill see you in the street, grab my nine, then spit a round
i empty out my clip and all i see shellz hittin the ground
ite...i dont like gunz in the same context as rhyming...but that was pretty good...work on ur wording..6/10
when this is done u'll ask"whyd i get in the ring witcha"
lookin all shocked and amazed like fab in your signature
blah...that was ite...work on your wording...5/10

Golden Shellz

this faggot set up battle so he could write his verse overnite
we joined at the same time but yet ur still new to this site
played...alot of peeps say stuff similar to that...3/10
i bet hes thinkin to himself "damn my lyrics flow like a ocean'
quick reminder get ya rapbook from ya porn and hand lotion
ummm...yea...sex jokes are played...2/10
ur not a newbie aint no way u can convince me
ur lyrics are like a comeback track from Kelis to 50[ha]
dont sweat urself...that was decent...5/10
damn it looks like ur scarred not even neosproin can make a remedy
ur a rapper? u got as much competition as Jamie Kennedy
damn...that was ppplllaaayyyeeeddd...NO MORE MALIBU....0/10

J-Money gets this

.Ike. 03-11-05 06:19 PM

Voted For: J-Money

this goes to J-money....both had good verses...but i thought j money got this from all of his wordplay and plays off of golden shellz name...he had a consistent verse all the way through with pretty dope punches..and thats what got this for him....Golden...some of your punches were good...some werent...inconsistency is your problem....and your didnt have as many dope personals and plays off of J's name...


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