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uppin fo some votes people ill return the favour aight
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lol personalz are mo important den da flow mayne
dat was clearly a dr vote uppin for more votes |
nah ufc...you gotta weigh shit up. i mean you could write a hundred personals without even rhymin, but you wouldn't expect to win. you gotta decide who got tha better verse overall, and in this case i thought it was phive.
anyway...i don't even like phive. he's a fuckin cunt with lines more stretched than jackie stallones face |
fuck you man i ripped you ya fuckin kyke dont vote for my shit bitch you fuckin suck
yo ufc nice werk but man i beat ya ass man |
if ya don't want me to vote on yer wack ass battles blacklist me. get mah vote removed if you want.
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yo uppin fo some mutha fuckin votes niggaz
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uppin dis fo some mo votes
but nah phive if you win dis its cause of da dr cause i beat yo ass mayne |
This was feedback posted for Da UFC
da-aiight you got this battle...........you had more personals than phive and your punches were wittier.............also you got some creative lines............although you self glorified a lil i still believe you beat him.........you flow wasnt that great you def got beat on that part..........your structure was perfect..............pretty good job.........no vocab tho....up that and your multis cuz multies=flow
phive-your structure was horrible man................you had really good flow due to the ammount of multies.......but you lacked in throwin personals and more direct punches..............you had pretty decent vocab also..........but like i said you lacked in directing your punches...some were good but some werent............and work on personals..............but fix up ya structure and ya punches/personals and you'll start winnin |
Voted For: Da UFC
my vote goes ta da ufc punches= ufc structure=ufc wordplay=neither I gotta give it to him coz i think he came harder, and his structure was better. u r structure was a bit fucked man. plues i was feeling his punches more |
uppin fo some honest votes ill return the favour aight
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see homie i told you i beat ya dis shit aint even close dawgz i merked yo ass
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uppin dis shit fo real
we will return da favor on da honest votez |
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