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Voted For: Kesse

v/kesse......he gets my vote cause he came wit good punchs....an creative diss that were original an ur structure was better...chow ur structure was off an u had some played lines....no hate juss elavate
punchs=k
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This was feedback posted for Kesse
 

not too difficult to vote on this one. kesse jus seems more experienced than chowie, and knows what wins battles. kesse had better structure, punchz, flow and personals.

chowie you jus need practice and a bit of direction against yer opponent...its ok to use filler (shit about what yer goin to do to your opponent or about yourself) as long as you also have some punchz (dis's to your opponent). even better if you can include some personals. finally, yer need to sort out yer structure so its more obvious where one line ends and tha next starts..makes it easier for people to read whatcha rhyming.

shit that was some long-ass feedback. now someone vote on mah battle vs phive!


argh..i typed all that and then realised i haven't enuff posts to vote!!! call this shit feedback, k

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Voted For: Kesse

OH MY FUCK!!!!!! why did this battle even happen

Kesse- u came pretty nice in all aspects on this one even though it definitely wasnt needed...u had nice punches...nice personals which i dont understand cuz he hasnt even done anything here yet...lol...and words cannot explain how bad u merked him

Chow - that was the worst thing i've ever see...no structure, stretch lines, no flow, no personals, and the occasional punch that u actually had was stolen from the likes of 50 cent who is lyrical shit...omg...did u actually expect to win

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