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This was feedback posted for CeleriTy
 

U’ll only see Jaws drop if u in Blockbuster durin’ an earthquake..

^ omfg...that shit was flames fam,...dayum...i aint finna vote but that line was dangerous.....Fiya shit cuzz

Voted For: Kordozar


Kordozar
I Think You Had A Decent Verse Man, This Ish Cae And Was Created, The Punches Was Hitting Well Man, You Had Personals That Was Mad Nice Yo, Structure Was Alright You've Done Better Man, Multi's None Realy But It Was A Good Verse, You Had A Decent Meta Here, My Favorite LBar Was The Closer, Killed It With That

Celerity
Okay Man Like Where Was Your Personals And Punches, It Was A Good Verse But It Wasn't Really A Battle This Wasn't Really Cool, Your Vocabulary Was The Best Part Besides The Structure man, Also, Try To Get Some Meta's Up In Here You Can Win Battles With Em', Over All You Need To Work On Punches, Coz I Really Though These Were Weak Man

Vote-Kordozar

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Vote disqualified for suspected d/r.

Voted For: CeleriTy

yo dawg you got this shit better
punches ce
opener ce
closer ce
multis ce
structure ce

hey kord nice verse but werk on ya personals and dont make fun of his mom dawg thats overplayed

and quit duckin our battle

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

OMFG.. fatal lyrikz.. that has to be one of THEE BIGGEST DR VOTES i have ever seen.. considering 1 i jus read how kordozar is like ur best friend on rv in a lyricist lounge thread.. and 2. all i had thru my whole verse was punches and meta's u dumbass.. what do u think my 2,4, and 6th lines were.. all punches.. wow this is fucked up.. UPPING...

Voted For: Kordozar

this wasnt a very good battle.
not much to chose from.
i thought kordozer would of son'd him after i read his verse.
both verses were horrible.....

chose winners verse:

When Tha Thunder Gauge Blow His Chest Gone Feel Like Summer Days Yo...
And He Came In Tha World For Free Cus His Moms Was A Underaged Hoe...
not much in this opener, but better then his.
His Whore Hates Him Fake Thug With Monopoly Money Sportin Paper...
Beat Him Senseless Then His Eye'll "Trail"Red & Blacc Like Tha Portland Blazers..
even if this line was a filler....it was horrible
He Can't Cee Me Tho Nigga On Alias Battlin Newbies To Be 3-0....
Try To Beat Me Tho,But Ya Results Came Bacc Negative Like Maurys Tv Show.
this was pretty much the only decnet line, but you got lucky you came decent with the closer....or else i would of voted for him.

v/kordozer

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=181383
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