id leave some but it says the servers down wait i heard this lol wasnt really feeling the beat flow was off in a few places pretty good

upping for feed...

quality sounded good, beat was koo
intro was a tad long, flow was ok, delevery could use just a lil work
voice is ok
singing is ehh, its ok i guess

iight thanx.. uppin

20 Grand pretty much summed it up for me, the intro was a little long but the flow and delivery was alright but i didn't really dig the singing, but def. keep dropping

thanx.. uppin...

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ok i'm peeping now...and you know that beats fire...ya voice is cool....singing was tight.....flow was straight....lyrics seemd pretty deep man...keep that up right there..i was feeling that man....nice track..

Overall-7/10

overall - 7/10

i liked this track...something for the females, ya flow could use a lil help and so could ya delivery...u sorta sounded like u were scared to sing as if u were confident...i liked this though...i have to say that i was feeling the hook...if u wanna collab sometime holla at me on AIM at Debit12188 or yahoo...

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Nas feat. 2pac - Thugs Mansion [Acoustic] instrumental.

wtf is that shyt?? ^^ thats stupid?

I am not the best person to give criticism on the technical side of it all so I'ma just stick to the content and the feeling I got from this song.

I already told you I was really digging it and like OMB said, this wasn't a lyrical song. This was pure emotions brought to us so I don't feel there was a need for big vocab, I even think it would've just ruined the whole thing. I enjoy listening to your voice, your singing is very good and I bet every girl would love to get a song like this dedicated to her. I like the beat, the music...it really suits the topic and your singing as well. Quality is good, delivery might be slightly better but you had this vulnerable thing going on which I liked :)

DQ

hahaha thanx DQ!! Wen u gonna drop some audio?

Listening: 2Pac Thugs Mansion beat yea yea i LOOOOOOOOVE this beat...romantic stuff...nice rhyming...topically you on point...flow is nice...lol parents are scarey...hook was dope...the emotion is some of the best i have heard so far since listening on RV...props on this track you done well


Keep droppin :thumbup:

Just pointing out which beat you used. I like that beat.