Voted For: the kid 523


the kid- Verse was nice...so was your punches....Had some nice sick azz personals also....Structure was decent...easy to read n all...but overall your won this with a better overall verse and punches...8.6/10........

wan - your verse was nice a little, but your punches really didnt seem to connect hard enough...your structure was layed out nice...but you went weak on punches thats all...5.9/10.......

V/ the kid
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uppin this shit for the freakin win already........

uppin for the fuckin win already lol

uppin for the win .

uppin this shit for the win

Voted For: the kid 523

A'ight...I'ma keep this simple...

The Kid...you're few bars were a'ight...opener...meh...middle...blah...played...a nd your closer, you sorta dissed yourself....overall, okay flow, decent structure...elevation is good for everybody. Your problem is that you need to get more creative...work on that.

Wanadieannigga...You arent punching the kid directly. You are rapping about kids who clam they can rap...not THE kid...decent structure, flow was fucked because your structure was messed to shit...you also need to get more creative, and dont start new lines that continue from the last.

This battle was wacka s fuck...but The kid takes it for at least punching Wanadien directly.