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Voted For: FlOw InTeLLiGeNt

wow this was soo incredibly one sided its unbelievable.. im gonna be amazed if i post this and see that troop even got 1 vote.. but its like this.. flow goes to flow, structure was a tie even tho troop had to make his size one for it to be structured nicely.. ughh troop is still having problems writin punches, they really arent hard hitting ... flow intell had nice punches the whole way thru.. the explosive line was nice.. but flow's closer was kinda weak.. maybe i just didnt get it.. but my vote goes to flow mainly because he had harder hitting punches the whole way thru, pz... no hate......

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2nd and 4th bar were fire.
fucks my money at flow?

workin on everyone. Soc will be the first to be paid but ill have all of the shit soon. no idea when so whenever i PM you that means you gettin it

Voted For: FlOw InTeLLiGeNt

FLOW TOOK THIS ONE IN MY OPIONION. BETTER PERSONALS, AND HARD HITTING WORDPLAY. NOT TOO MANY PUNCHES IN THIS BATTLE THO.
FLOW-I WAS FEELIN YO VERSE MORE BECAUSE YOU CAME HARDER IN THIS ONE. BETTER STRUCTURE AND FLOW, AND NICE PERSONALS. I WAS ONLY FEELIN YO PUNCHES A LIL BIT THO, THATS BECAUSE MOST OF EM DIDNT HIT LIKE THEY SHOULDVE, BUT YOUR WORDPLAY BACKED THAT UP.
JIM-NICE VERSE, BUT I DONT THINK YOU TOOK THIS ONE. I THINK YOU CAME TOO SOFT IN METTAS AND WORDPLAY. NOT TOO MANY GOOD PUNCHES FROM YOU THAT I FELT. SOME GOOD PERSONALS THO, BUT I DONT THINK IT WAS ENOUGH.
OVERALL-U JUST HAD TO GIVE THIS ONE TO FLOW. BETTER PERSONALS AND WORDPLAY IN THIS ONE TO ME.

V/FLOW

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Voted For: FlOw InTeLLiGeNt

Listen Bitch im way Ova ya Pre Writs....As if u Didnt Kno Prick
Stop Nuttin in Vokes Throat..Fag Perhaps? Guess ya Flow is Sick
ok opener, cud be better!
No Show Hoe.Stop Switchin ya Names No Ko's From this Lil Lame
All of Your Winz are Inconsistent Like Hit Singles From Lil Zane
pretty gud!!
You Gone Check in this Time?..O..Rv..Here we go Thru a Re Play
Nobody Notices Mr. Flow Like StewyGriff runnin thru a Free Way
....decent
This Kid Claim He Run His Own Construction.....Stop u Full of Shit
U Kinda like Shaq at the Free Throw........All Ya Shotz full of Brix
shaq shit is played, but ok i guess.
15 Minz u Neva Dropped a Key Style..Maybe King of Rap Writtens
You a Pussy Type...Korv? U Part of the "K"ing "O"f "R"ap "V"ixens
nice closer, ure best bar


Jimmy you think you up to the test ? Aint no way u touchin this vet
Thunderous text, you need dashes-just-to-make-your- punches-connect
dope opener, 2nd line hot!!
You talkin shit? I'll feed it to you, then start beating it outta ya
Now ya got alot of 'problems on ya hands', like 'cheating in algebra'
ok, not ure best!!
Melt ya away, now i got ya matrix corrosive, this hater can notice
He woudlnt 'go out with a bang' even if he was 'dating exlposives'
dope 2nd line again!
Nothing but a vocab head, cant rock raps and slaughter son
Talk bout 9's and gats? But you couldnt cock back a water gun
again.......hot 2nd line.
Ignoring the flow? You might fold... Until your spine contorts
Cuz im goin so low, they'll strike oil before they find ya corpse
decent bar
This verse is like a laxative, the way im dropping rapid shit
you need to practice kid, I'll make you vanish like a magic trick
closer ok, but concepts kinda played

Overall flow took this one with more consistency, his punches were hittin harder and he had sum nice creativity, only low point was the closer which was kinda played. Jimmy, ure shit was sort of opposite to flow, u started ok but was relatively weak up until the end where u finished on a high, u need to work on those punches son!!!!

^^^ damn again!!! i really need to remember to put this shit after i vote.

return the fave on one of my battles!!!!! appreciated yo!!!!

upping for more votes............................................. ..............

Voted For: (Jimmy Pocketz)

Jimmy you think you up to the test ? Aint no way u touchin this vet
Thunderous text, you need dashes-just-to-make-your- punches-connect
^^^OKAY..OPENER..WORD UP I SAW SOME1 SPIT DIS BE4 I 4GOT WHERE THO

For real though...

You talkin shit? I'll feed it to you, then start beating it outta ya
Now ya got alot of 'problems on ya hands', like 'cheating in algebra'
^^^KIND OF CLEVA...I WAS FEELIN IT
Melt ya away, now i got ya matrix corrosive, this hater can notice
He woudlnt 'go out with a bang' even if he was 'dating exlposives'
^^^NO...DAT WAS MADD
Nothing but a vocab head, cant rock raps and slaughter son
Talk bout 9's and gats? But you couldnt cock back a water gun
^^^^LOL...SOUND LIKE A LIL KIDD FAM
Ignoring the flow? You might fold... Until your spine contorts
Cuz im goin so low, they'll strike oil before they find ya corpse
^^^NICE..NOT A PUNCH BUT A DECENT LINE
This verse is like a laxative, the way im dropping rapid shit
you need to practice kid, I'll make you vanish like a magic trick
^^^U DONT EVEN SOUND RITE TRYIN D ASUE MULTIS FAM..DA MAGIC SHIT IS PLAYED


JP:
Listen Bitch im way Ova ya Pre Writs....As if u Didnt Kno Prick
Stop Nuttin in Vokes Throat..Fag Perhaps? Guess ya Flow is Sick
^^^GOOD OPENER...U ALREADY WON DIS BATTLE CUZZ U ACUALLY HAD A PERSONAL
No Show Hoe.Stop Switchin ya Names No Ko's From this Lil Lame
All of Your Winz are Inconsistent Like Hit Singles From Lil Zane
^^^NAH..DA LIL LAME...LIL ZANE SHIT SOUND WEAK..U BEEN RAPPIN 4 A WHILE NOW STEP YA RYHME SCHEME UP
You Gone Check in this Time?..O..Rv..Here we go Thru a Re Play
Nobody Notices Mr. Flow Like StewyGriff runnin thru a Free Way
^^^NAH WASN'T FEELIN
This Kid Claim He Run His Own Construction.....Stop u Full of Shit
U Kinda like Shaq at the Free Throw........All Ya Shotz full of Brix
^^^U COULD PLAYED OFF DAT PERSONAL A LIL BETTA
15 Minz u Neva Dropped a Key Style..Maybe King of Rap Writtens
You a Pussy Type...Korv? U Part of the "K"ing "O"f "R"ap "V"ixens
^^^LOL...GOOD PERSONAL BUT SWITCH DAT RYHME SCHEME UP

NUFF SAID....FLOW HAD SOME CLEVA SHIT NO HATE BUT DAT SHIT SOUND PRE WRITTEN NO PERSONALS OR NOTHIN...AND JIMMY U HAD A COUPLE PERSONALS SO I GIVE DIS SHIT 2 U

Finally a real fuckin vote..............................

Upping this battle for real votes :thumbup:... yup

oh and return da favor ppl's link in my sig

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