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Ryan Hughes 03-23-05 01:51 PM

Voted For: LexiKon

V/LexiKon.....this was a one sided battle...lex came wit punchs that were hard hitting an came wit many personals an structure was on point the mariah line was good....messiah your structure needs work it was off an ur punchs were a little basic an u didnt have that many good personals.......No Hate.....RETURN THE FAVOR...
opner=l
closer=l
punchs=l
vocab=l
personals=l
structure=l
overall=Lexikon

MaRVJay 03-23-05 02:13 PM

Voted For: Deh Me$$iah

ummm cool battle..nothin spectacular...lex started it off like he was say some real personal shit but didn't....

opener-DM
structure-lexi
punchlines-lexi..by a lil
creativity-lexi
multis-nun
flow-DM
personals-nun
finisher-DM...
enjoyed-DM....maybe bcuzz he had more lines or whuteva but i felt his verse more...lexi ya punchliens r madd basic fam..ya ryhme scehem is okay...but i think u were gonna hurt dis kids career since u knew em but ya didn't...

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Orion. 03-23-05 02:23 PM

Voted For: LexiKon

ayo Overall

Lexikon - decent drop my nig...just returning an honest vote.. felt like you came out with an overall decent verse...had a few good metas and some punches...keep doin what you doin...

Work on...um just get some work done on you structure yo...

best line in my opinion was tha mariah line...

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Messaih - well um you had some lines in there..but like alot of people in this site it didnt have much substance...s

work on....your strucuture is mad fucked up yo, and go read some tutorials...and youll do fine..

best line - tha last one because it was the end....

V/ LEXIKON...

no need to rtf....

Also Known. 03-24-05 09:19 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by MaRVJay1009
Voted For: Deh Me$$iah

ummm cool battle..nothin spectacular...lex started it off like he was say some real personal shit but didn't....

opener-DM
structure-lexi
punchlines-lexi..by a lil
creativity-lexi
multis-nun
flow-DM
personals-nun
finisher-DM...
enjoyed-DM....maybe bcuzz he had more lines or whuteva but i felt his verse more...lexi ya punchliens r madd basic fam..ya ryhme scehem is okay...but i think u were gonna hurt dis kids career since u knew em but ya didn't...



fuck you and your hate votes bitch ima knock your bitch ass out in a battle just wait ima need a min cuz im at my girls house cant do it here but when i get home i'll kill you and that shit you talkin peace out you punk rock beezy

Premanition 03-25-05 03:53 PM

Voted For: LexiKon

lex got this easy

other kid was wack, basically punches were basic and didnt hit, it was long as hell and boring, no creativity, sorry but not feelin it

lex ur verse was pretty gud not ya best but easily gud enough, punches were consistant although nothin special

peace

Also Known. 03-25-05 04:05 PM

A yo what the fuck i won thats five votes why aint this closed?

Also Known. 03-27-05 01:56 AM

aight whatever i'll win this battle with 6 votes then lol peeps get to votin

Re~Verb 03-27-05 01:04 PM

Voted For: LexiKon

LEX EASY WINS....APART FROM RHYMIN MESSIAH YA VERSE HAD NOTHIN.......
LEX BETA STRUC 4 A START.BUT HE HAD NICE WORDPLAY AN PUNCHES THAT RIPPED MESSIAH IN ONE BAR..#
NO HATE JUS TRUTH..

RETURN ONE PEEPS
PLZ RETURN ONE HONESTLY

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