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BiZzO 03-15-05 03:38 AM

Voted For: ~High-Dro~

good battle.. heres the break down..
high - you had good flow, realli nice vocabulary, good punches and an awsome opener and closer...
phive - you had an alright flow, alright punches and that but ya structure and punches laced a bit more than Highs verse..
opener - phive
closer - high
punches - high
flow - high
structure - high
vocabulary - high
enjoyment - high
vote - high
yo phive no hate man, u kno i give u mad respect but high gets this battle sorry homie.. :thumbup:

Dex 03-15-05 04:57 AM

Voted For: ~High-Dro~

This was one of the best verses i seen from phive but he was totally outdone in this. Il break it down bar-by-bar:

open: Phive's was alrite, seemed quite basic, no wordply, multis, or metaphor used but a good punch. High-Dro's opener smashed it up! Really nice metaphor to make a great personal punch that hit hard. 1st Bar: High-Dro

Middle bar: Phives was cool, better than the opener. Good punch, nicely done. High-Dro had a nice metaphor but the punch wasnt hitting as hard and didnt come off too well. Middle Bar: Phive

Closer: Phive attempted mutlis here i think which i wasnt feeing at all. In my opinion your closer wasnt good, phive, the punch sucked. High-Dro had a quality closer which clinched it for him. Well worded punchline, with good set-up. Nice goings high-dro took it. Closer: High-Dro

MaRVJay 03-15-05 06:19 AM

Voted For: ~High-Dro~


i'ma win this battle bitch, this is a joke, you aint even a challenge
your name is only 'phive' cuz u one-tenth of 50 cent's lyrical talent
^^^LOL DOPE...GOOD OPENER
today voters will hear u screamin, like when ur fucked in the penitentiary
when it comes to RV losses, homie, you're the quarter man of the century
^^^OKAY LINE
you must be underrated cuz i checked your sig and it said ur a "lyrical master"
on second thought, maybe you're just mentally challenged or a "satirical bastard"
^^^IF U WOULN'DT OF EXPLAINED IT I WOULD OF SAID IT WAS WACK BUT SINCE U DID..I SAY IT WAS AN OKAY CLOSER..




High dro, imma knock out ya lights, and leave you no flow,

fuck bro, same used rhymes, i though so, stop dick ridin, Homo
^^^2 BASIC FAM..

With aliases up ya ass causin constipation, you tryin ta be #1

internet rapper, with no education, a loser from day one,
^^LOL OKAY

fucking bitch, ya sister makes a betta son, gettin ya crew ta

vote for you, you wont do, cheating for you, alias Who?
^^^DIDN'T RYHME SO U JUST WASTED A LINE..

OVERALL:i gotta go with dro he had more creativity in his verse a couple punchlines....phive all u had was one funny line datz it...

LINK IN MY SIG RETURND A FAVIR OR I WILL SEND A VIRUS 2 YA COMPUTER

A_M_H 03-15-05 08:54 AM

Voted For: ~High-Dro~

ight this was an 1-sided battle all the way out no hate:
flow- high-dro, was structured betta, & made it sound
good
punches- phive ur's were played, & dro urs was played a
lil but not all the thru tho
personals- dro had more & were betta, phive were
pretty lame & didn't 2 good 2getha, also
u shouldn't separate ur lines so much
multies- obviously, dro can win by his type of rhyme
scheme, cuz his flow & multies will win, u should
look very close & u'll c phive
vocab-both were lacking in sum places, & need
elevation but dro took this category by far
originality- overall both verses were ok, but dro won my
vote by coming harder in his verse wit
all the thangz i listed; while phive u were
lacking but work on it & u'll get it


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