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Kesse
Nice Verse Man Punches Was Here They Was Pretty Good, Personals Ey! Wasn't To Much Here But Alright, Vocabulary That's Dope You Always Come With Some Good Vocabulary Here, I Think There Was Only One Personals Here That Shit Was Dope, Structure Ey! You Can Work On That But Yo It's Cool, Only Thing You Didn't Have Here Was Multi's, You Had Everything Else Basically Good Job On This Verse Man Over All Punches Personals Vocabulary Good Job......8.5/10

Glockoma
Punches , Pretty Good Son, You Don't Spit Like A Newb, Personals Iffy Shit Cozzin, Multi's Was Your Best Shit Here, Vocabulary Was Some What Basic, But Good Enough, Meta's Pretty Decent Shit I Was Digging The Opener of This Verse, But The Closer Was Horrible Man, Find Some New Vocabulary My Nigka, Punches In Here Was Also Kind Of Iffy, It Wasn't To Much Of A Hassle To Get Some Better Shit But I Figure You Did Well, And Props For That, Structure You Need To Elevate on That Man For Reals, Both Of You Do...Over All.....8/10

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Kesse was better because his punches were more direct....Its always hard when u use someones name, he killed him with da part bout da eye disease....ads for vacuums was hard as fuck 2


I was feelin glocs mini multis...none in kesses


I was feelin kesse more

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Kesse:

you claim your verses are good, but your shit belongs in the bath room
i'll have you doubting your drop, saying "it really sucks" like adds for vaccuums
^^decent punch good meta 6/10
your verses are useless, like using a mousetrap without any cheese
looking at your writtens... think you got more than just an eye disease
^^dope meta 7/10
still couldnt spit good shit if your mouth was friend to my brain
my verse will hit so hard, leave you to experience the end of your name
^^dope bar.. reall hit hard 9/10
i'd quit, rap isn't your area....like drug dealers selling to youth
cause if you can't see the crap you write, your name must be telling the truth
^^ kinda played since you used a line like it already 5/10

overall: 27/40 (68%)

Glockoma:

I'm Fuckin' This Guy-Up... Have Him High In The Sky-Yup...
"Grapplin' Wit GlocK"..? You'll Get "Shot" In This Tie-Up[/b]...
^^good multies decent meta 6/10
Punked-Bitch... I'm Gonna Have Ya Body Dumped-Quick...
Even Tho Yer "Gassed"... You Still Won't Be Able To Pump-It...
^^played bar 3/10
Cuz I'm Automatic... Quick To Leave Ya Like Cellphone Static...
"Puttin' GlocK Away"..? Even If I Waz Ya "Body Heat", You Still Couldn't Pack-It...
^^2nd line stretched/forced.. good meta though 6/10
I'm "Sprayin" Gun-Talk... Cuz My Name Says It All... I'll Have You Spun-Popped...
Like "Pringles"... So When I Leave A "Chip On Ya Shoulder", You'll Know All The Fun-Stopped...
^^stretched again but still dope 7/10
For The Final Thought... I'll Have The GlocK Reline Ya Thoughts Wit Hollow-Tips...
You'll Become Vile-Bitch... So When You "Smile"... Ya "Mouf Will Be Disgusted" And Swallow-Lips...
^^stretched again but dope 7/10

Overall: 29/50 (58%)

Vote: Kesse

Because he actually used a personal, and glocks verse looked worse than it sounded... stop with all that italics and bold shit it is really wack.. i dont know what board you used to be on but that shit dont fly here.


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