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Voted For: Chaos


choas:
My pens dence commence suspence-like intensed tumors.....
Bullets get sent sooner-Lookin at ya face I see God has a sense of humor.....
^^^NICE WORDPLAY/MULTIS....
heart of hitler, Buck Shot said I was weak?? how you gonna it trick ya.....
ya Hairline and Lamar Odom got something in Common-they both hate them Clippers!!.....
^^LOL..DIS SHIT WAS HOTT
Buck Shot, I insert the clip when I pack heat, Kewl ILL even slaughter ya friends....
I stay wit a 9 and a 45, you niggas would think I was a quarter to 10.....
^^^CHILL...U BIT DIS FROM SOMBODY WORD 4 WORD FAM..OR I PROBLY JUST HEARD DIS LINE 2 MANY TIMES
Buck shot disses are weak, Punchlines are old, not even ya flowin is good.....
Buck shot a certified mechanic dammit, that's the only time you go in the hood.....
^^^NICE PUNCHLINE...
the 12 gauge filled wit rage, glance the page, my sig displays ur next destination..
Buck shot still lookin for a internet girlfriend?? going on Chatlines typing Age, sex,and location.....
^^LMAOOOOO...FUNNY SHIT
God made man in the image of him, so I guess I can't be hating this bitch....
it ain't my fault God Made Buck shot in the image of him taking a shit.....
^^WHOAA
I'll put that heat to ya body like 90 degree weather, while wearing a sweater.....
I'ma be honest ya skill is like AIDS patients cuz they never gonna get better......
^^^CREATIVE SHIT I WAS FEELIN IT
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Finisher
Ima televized visionary leaving ya vision blurry, pissin flurrie......
of pain, rain, this dame gettin fuck in the battle style missionary.....
^^^WOOO GOOD CLOSER FAM..DA FLOWW AS CRAZEE
I'm just gonna spit flames, cuz I know in ya brain u fear heaters....
Buck shot only on the site cuz ya know i needed a cheerleader ...
^^LOL

OVERALL: U HAD A VERY CREATIVE VERSE..NO PERSONALS SO IT KIND OF SEEMED PREWRITTIN..BUT GOOD SHIT THO


buckshot:
Papercuts are the only time he ''draws Blood''
Posted up in the Hood?
^^^^UMM HOOD & BLOOD DONT RYHME FAM...
.................Naw, u just 'popped it' ta Fix your Ride
had the Audosity ta call me whack? think i'ma let that slide?
^^WEAK LINE
i got pride, you aint even gangsta enuff ta get with E-style
took you all afternoon ta write it, an i just freestyle'd...
^^^OKAY
i'ma leave ya words in a pile...like a bag of scrabble letters
We seen all ya disses bePhour but he still trynna Met'us (metas)
^^^SEE DATZ WHUT IM TALKIN BOUT...GET CREATIVE
Think u hustle? u got less 'Strap' muscle...
..............................than Carson Jets Biceps
^^^^GAY LINE..TALKIN ABOUT ANOTHER MAN'S BODY
You can feel-My-Tefs all u gotta do is Holla...
cause ya flows gettin u less than bein in Bloomingdales with a Dollar
^^^^REAL REAL REAL WEAK
From Shotta ta Dope, then ta Buckin.Shots...
this wannabe 'Game' would only ever be ''On the Road''
.....................................signin up for 'Truckin Slots'
^^^OKAY
play off each of my Name'z, thats all it is, its just 'Played'..
Kids Dyslexic....
...............i got the 5 votes n he said ''okay i was O.K'd''
^^^WEAK
Fake Bitch, get a job as a 'BarMaid'..you'll serve hotter Bars..
u aint goin nowhere in life, like Tireless Cars
^^COULD OF WORDED IT BETTA
ya flows like Memoirs, barely even worthy as Notes
Kids pissed he never got 'Feed, Back' cause he... .
.........................................put a Deposit On Votes!
^^ALRITE....

UMM...BUCK U LOSE I DONT KNOW WHUT U B TRYIN DA DO...U DID ALOT OF SELF GLORIFCATION IN DIS...AND UR REALLY NOT DAT CREATIVE U SPITTIN BASIC SHIT...AT LEAST IF U GON DO DAT HAVE SOME GOOD PERSONALS

This was feedback posted for Buck.Shot
 

ok youi win becuase your strucutre, thats al, but you also had some good lines but you should have tried a lil harder, atleast you should have took the full hour to write yours, but i guess it was good enough, but dope battle , you both could have re-worded some bars to make them sound and hit more better, but other than that it was a pretty good battle,

chaos, you had mad multies, but you had a wierd rhyme cheme, it wasnt the same through out the whole battle which made it hard to read, but good shit yo, i liked it alot, you had hella fucking dope metaphores, but if only you would have re-worded your lines, becuase they would have hit hella harder, but good shit

i cant vote becuase of my post but heres feedback

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=180235

retrun the favor, ohh yeah i think that BUCK SHOT wins :thumbup:

LOL ,@ The vote comin from MarvJay, an u expect ta take that serious Chaos???

The dude has ALWAYS hated me
but i aint gonna complain because of the feedback, strobe wont DQ it, theres no point ta HATE VOTES
*Shakes head @ Marv*

This was feedback posted for Buck.Shot
 

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^LOL....oookkkkk......uppin this shit so i can finsih this shit already...

This was feedback posted for Buck.Shot
 

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