You didn't even stay on topic only person who said you won was Kesse so fuck are you talking bout I stay'd on topic and told a true story fake things cant beat the truth.

actually....topic is "the one girl your in love with"....remember, theres more than one way to tell a story...you have to be able to write though.......and red's does tell a story man whos in love with a girl, he just took a different route to it.......you took the predictable path tony, not that it was bad, but you didnt have that great of imagery, mainly because your vocab is poor..........plus, you better not be talking about me ducking....or else i'll merk you :)

^ nm, on that last part, didnt see that is was jdot who was talking, haha

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Checking the polls.....................................

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checkin polls..........................................

^ they can on a rap site because how the hell do we know you're tellin the truth.....just because of two words you wrote at the bottom of your piece....last time i checked, there was no category for "how true was it"....but i guess i'll up this for you :)

And Red Bull ignored my reply. Your wack, nuff said!

Uppin this shit...

Tony, there is more then 1 way to express how you love a girl. You used a gay country love song style, just added words like weed. I used an fucked obession that you can't predict. Plus I had better structure and vocab. I don't care if your verse is true...congrats you told a true prewritten story. I made mine when I was drunk. Damn kids these days.

Your ass is a fuckin lie you know you pre-wrote that shit and it sounds like any other stalking track and how the hell did I remake a country song hell are you talking bout!

^ Ask kesse, I wrote it when i was drunk, it was at his fuckin' house. How's that for truth dick wad.

BITCH! Your wack Red Bull, real talk. Stop duckin and battle me you fag fuck!

^ pre-wrote that.....yeah, because red does so many topicals he was just waiting to use this one......and JDOT, why dont you not be an idiot cussing retard and challenge him the right way....and if you didnt notice, hes doing topicals now, so you might need to think a little bit before you challenge him

Yes, I only do topicals now. If you want to battle topical...get in line man...have so many lined up. PS: Get off my nuts, I did't respond because you can only up your battles 1 every 3 hours. I didn't even read your faggot posts.

Oh yeah...

Uppin this shit.

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peeping polls.... good looks fam... nice verse tony

Uppin this shit. Somebody just fuckin' vote on it...