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lol u feeded off lines in this battle an used it in ours morse lol, the buck line lol

nice drop tho amh, only flaw is the seperation of bars, but u mussa had this open before kon helped u out...

^dawg, ours was a freestyle battle, i wasnt even thinkin bout this at the time, i can see wut your thinkin thougth because of the resemblance, but w/e i was just playing ooff your old name, and besides, just because i used the werd buck in two verses doesnt mean i "played" offa dat line........herb

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uppin this 4 sum votes of people who actually know what a good verse is & not just jumping abroad sumbody else who had a sum played lines

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Voted For: morse code






aMH:
Diversity fuel's ya state of sex...Absurity That'll I'll be in Sig "Text"-
So "X" the thought of AMH Bein'g next...Is Oxymoronic like "Simply Complexx"-
^^^ALOT OF VOCAB USED HERE..BUT UR NOT SAYIN NOTHIN


Dismantling ""Codes''''...Thats "Period" like when a "Sentence Ends-
Beatin This "Fake Thug Trend" like the start of "Tennis Trends"...
^^^^LMAOOO FUKKIN WACK...WHUT R U SAYIN HERE FAM..U USE TREND TWICE IN 1 LINE AND IT WASN'T WORDPLAY


Menace Decends' thats the "Code!"...Stretch-N-bend...Like "Tendons-Mend-the-Joint"-
Annoint' ya "Book" so ya alphabets "Slick"...i mentioned"...it...How bout a Diet?...
^^^?????


Just try it...My rhyme's is like "Gravity"...u cant "Defie It-
This victory' u couldnt "Buy it...Actually...U could tie it' if ya knew how to divide the votes u "Deny bitch"..."Make up" ya List of "Lied" on victom's every "Five Minutes"-
^^^SEE NOW DAT WAS HOTT...DA WORDPLAY HERE WAS SICK


Leave "DENIED" painted on ya eyelids'...Like blind retired "Pilots"....
Tryin to "fly" "High lifts" with extreme "Milage"...Hey flava..this guys ~!~ "Stylish" as a "Pile of shitt"..Wouldnt Spit flames virally sick' with a "Viel Of Flint"...Leave "X" vets"RetirinQuik"...
^^^NO FAM U FIT LIKE 3000 WORDS IN 2 ONE LINE..DAT SHIT WONT WORK



morse code:
ill kill this new "buck", then end his obituary with "dear"*
your not on my level boy, not even A.ll M.ost H.ere
^^^^LOL DOPE NAME PLAY...N PUNCH
Ill beat you "repetitively", so get ready for a "losing streak"
your skills on the scale, equals your age , against me
^^^GOOD PERSONAL..BUT STREAK & ME DOESN'T RYHME
your lines never connect, like the web and piced up phones
im pacin a flow in a bag, like patients at nursing homes
^^^UUH OKAY LINE
like pc mouses your moving no where, cuz you have no balls
althoguh you did face me, a loss will be your "effect", and im the "cause"
^^GOOD CONCEPT...BUT I DIDN'T LIKE DA WAY IT RYHMED
your attempts to rap will lead to "no where", like "trap doors"
a "banana", would be the only time,youve ever been hard"core"**
^^NAHH
you wouldnt "shine" over me, if i gave you tickets to the "sun"
closest youll get to winning is a "split" decision, like a "bun"
^^^GOOD PUNCH I GOT IT
only time your "shit" is on "point", is when "crappin on a pencil tip"
like a retarded 9/11 terrorist, your punches will never hit
^^^DA FIRST LINE WAS FUNNY LOL..BUT I WASN'T FEELIN DA SECOND
this kids another 50 cent, claimin he started his leader ***
im "cold" "hearted", so quick, pulll out your "hand" "heater"****
^^^NAH..FAM


OKAY...MORSE TAKES DIS I UNDERSTOOD HIS VERSE PERFECTLY HE DIDN'T TRY DA USE WORDS HE FOUND IN DA DICITIONARY JUST DA MAKE HIS VERSE LOOK HOTT AND HE HAD A FEW PERSONALS...AMH I FELT LIKE 1 OF YA BARS DA REST WAS WEAK...DAT VERSE COULD OF BEEN DIRECTED 2 ANY1...

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Voted For: A_M_H

Morse Code
structure is good.. flow is pretty good.. you had a few multis.. you attempted wordplay, but most of it just came out garbage like.. a few, at best, of your punches connected.. you had a few attempted personals, but for the most part.. they didnt connect..

AMH
structure is good.. flow is on target.. had sum multis.. wordplay is decent.. a few of your punches connected.. & also sum good personals..

Overall
Morse Code had more multis and attempted more personals.. both had a good structure.. both had a good flow.. AMH had better wordplay and more connecting punches.. so, to me, wordplay and punches have more of an effect then multis and personals, so my vote goes to AMH.. pretty close battle though..

VOTE - A_M_H