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-   -   LyricalMa$tamind vs Tak- Ova (http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=182345)

LyricalMa$tamind 03-23-05 03:58 PM

tyte battle ya'll
uppin fa votes
come on
only 2 more votes fa me ta win
and 5 fa tak-ova ta win
so come on n vote n give feedback

LyricalMa$tamind 03-23-05 06:59 PM

come on yall vote pleaseeeee we need them i only need 2 more votes 2 win and tak ova needs 5 votes 2 win so please leave good feedback and vote 4 da betta battler

Ryan Hughes 03-23-05 07:36 PM

Voted For: LyricalMa$tamind

V/lyricalmastamind....this was a good battle but he came wit better punchs an personals wit structure thats was easily read....tak u had a alright verse u came to lightly an ur structure needs work it was off an hard to read ur punchs need work u were to basic.....No Hate....
RETURN THE FAVOR
Opener=L
closer=l
structure=l
punchs=l
vocab=l
personals=l
overall=lyricalmastamind

LyricalMa$tamind 03-24-05 03:13 PM

come on yall please vote 1 more vote 4 lyrical and 5 for tak ova please leave good feedback elaborate da battle and vote 4 da betta battler

~Tony Green~ 03-24-05 04:08 PM

Voted For: LyricalMa$tamind


iight only pointing out the bars I liked

you moved wrong today, you fucked up slack herb...
Now you aint a step ahead more like steppin backwards.
^^^HAHA funny bar 7/10
Considering you couldn't win until I tutored you.
^^^that was nice but kinda weak 5/10
This'd still be more mismatch than seal and Heidi Klum..
^^^Funny 7/10
FBI Looking for clues like they Sherlock Holmes.
^^^That was nice 6/10
The 12 guage will leave niggaz outta work like Martin Luther King Day
^^^^That was nice 8/10

You did good structure was nice next time work on more personals 7/10

Take Ova

U switch from soft to hard like a Taco shell, I got more shells than taco bell.
^^^^0/10 for one you bit that line from me grimmey as hell said that in one of my O.M.'s
Really don't even wanna read no more of your shit because you bit my line and your structure is fucked and hard to read No Hate but my vote.........
=LyricalMa$termind


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