Voted For: KiNg SoLo


king- Verse was nice...so was your punches....Had some nice sick azz personals also....Structure was decent...easy to read n all...but overall your won this with a better overall verse and punches...8.6/10........

one - your verse was nice a little, but your punches really didnt seem to connect hard enough...your structure was layed out nice...but you went weak on punches thats all...5.9/10.......

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Voted For: KiNg SoLo

Comin into the NOK forum.. your mouth open, now your blastin calls,
really i think the most impressive thing about you, is havin balls,
no
but that don't win battles, cause little homie we are the tightest,
with what i write i'll make million, you can settle for artheritus,
no
you might catch me and the NOK crew... see us racin about, meet me..
bitch you garbage, i ain't got a problem with 'takin you out' weekly,
decent here
lets be honest... ima nice guy and i won't really enjoy this match,
better yet i'll take you out daily.. like you with your porno mags.,
mags & match don’t rhyme
and Solo.. why you think you a king, but your waitin for that crown,
your status is back from the grave? well ima be layin you back down,*
okay? Doesn’t make since here
you can't see the kid bitch... so better give up on you spottin me,
bitch your a king? hahahaha, thats too bad we live in a democracy...**
decent
you say some sick shit, highly doubt it.. but then its a rare ryhme,
and even if you were a king... this is how you spend your sparetime?
weak

Dude’s got a bum-rep, I already won and I ain’t even begun-yet
U’ll never lead, cuz yo, I got 6 leaps to go Beyond ure OneStep
decent
This is a boxing ring……I’m Ali, punches hit u like a bee sting
U cud be years beyond ‘n’ still get (N)ocked (O)ut by tha (K)ing
okay, decent
OneStep reppin the scared N.O.K, my callout got ya crew rattled G
Y’all supposed to be tough, yet only 1 of u man enuff to battle me
nah weak here
Can’t Nock Out Kingz, ure lyrics can’t even break my royal armour
Got ya whole crew wit my cattle makin me a certified “bitch” farmer
okay
Got ure 3 wins from bitches, tha odds be favourin me on this night
Cuz odds are, 10-1 ure bitch ass will get knocked out in a real fight
decent
Shit, U KNOW u can’t win, U JUST GOT hit by lyrics too sick
My (W)ins always (H)igher, cuz (O)neStep gets (R)ipped by (E)very (D)ick
uhhhh…pretty decent

Overall KiNg SoLo took this one, came harder in the punches, non-played or weak
All the way through like OneStep, but overall K.S. took this one though

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Voted For: KiNg SoLo

King Solos Verse
Dude’s got a bum-rep, I already won and I ain’t even begun-yet
U’ll never lead, cuz yo, I got 6 leaps to go Beyond ure OneStep
nice personal and opener
This is a boxing ring……I’m Ali, punches hit u like a bee sting
U cud be years beyond ‘n’ still get (N)ocked (O)ut by tha (K)ing
lol...another good personal
OneStep reppin the scared N.O.K, my callout got ya crew rattled G
Y’all supposed to be tough, yet only 1 of u man enuff to battle me
pretty good...
Can’t Nock Out Kingz, ure lyrics can’t even break my royal armour
Got ya whole crew wit my cattle makin me a certified “bitch” farmer
eh wasnt feelin this one
Got ure 3 wins from bitches, tha odds be favourin me on this night
Cuz odds are, 10-1 ure bitch ass will get knocked out in a real fight
lol...eh
Shit, U KNOW u can’t win, U JUST GOT hit by lyrics too sick
My (W)ins always (H)igher, cuz (O)neStep gets (R)ipped by (E)very (D)ick
lmao...good closer


OneStepBeyonds Verse
Comin into the NOK forum.. your mouth open, now your blastin calls,
really i think the most impressive thing about you, is havin balls,
eh...ok opener but felt kinda weak
but that don't win battles, cause little homie we are the tightest,
with what i write i'll make million, you can settle for artheritus,
wasnt feelin it
you might catch me and the NOK crew... see us racin about, meet me..
bitch you garbage, i ain't got a problem with 'takin you out' weekly,
same...felt weak
lets be honest... ima nice guy and i won't really enjoy this match,
better yet i'll take you out daily.. like you with your porno mags.,
lol...good
and Solo.. why you think you a king, but your waitin for that crown,
your status is back from the grave? well ima be layin you back down,*
eh...ok
you can't see the kid bitch... so better give up on you spottin me,
bitch your a king? hahahaha, thats too bad we live in a democracy...**
i think coulda been worded better but ok personal...
you say some sick shit, highly doubt it.. but then its a rare ryhme,
and even if you were a king... this is how you spend your sparetime?
nah...weak closer

Overall this was an ok battle from both but i thought king solos punches hit harder and the personals were more thought out and creative...no hate good luck

peace

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dayum the second line was fuckin dangerous....!!!...