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thx fo da feed.
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nice Open mic ...good use of vocab...
pretty nice topic you choose Nice structure... you had lots of emotinos and nice wordplay... good imagery ... ... The flow and rhythem was good and nice chorus overall this was good open mic hope to see you again ...7.5/10 |
thx fo da feed.
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i aint even gotta read it and know shawdy ripped it...........BUT I did lol..anyway tho dis piece is real hot that last verse sounded like some shit you've really experienced. thats tha kinda shit i love to read cuz its real to the core and you can get so indepth wit it. return tha favor. 1.
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yo i like the topic and how it was out to your friends...i bet they really appreciate that...but i give it a 7 outta 10.
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