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This was feedback posted for Hot Sauce
 

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Voted For: Hot Sauce

Flow: Blah
Punches: mr Sauce
Personals: Suace
Wordplay: Sauce
Metas: Sauce
Multis: Neither
Enjoyment: Blah

Vote: Sauce

Explanation: Sauce Got This other guy was just to basic .. sauce had some good metas .. nothing great but enough to win .. stay elevating .. stay up 1

Voted For: Hot Sauce

Blah.

Khaos_Renegade:
This verse sucked. Plain and simple. Punches were played, weak, and no personals. No wordplay, no multis, structure sucked, kid you need to elevate fast. R. Kelly? COME ON! Have you no creativity?

Hot Sauce:
Punches were decent as were the personals. Your wordplay needs to improve. Work on your structure as well. Your first stanza took this honestly.

Overall, not that great of a battle, but HS gets this for harder punches, personals, creativity, better wordplay, and overall just a better verse.

v/Hot Sauce

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Voted For: Hot Sauce

Yung wun took dis one
kd-your verse was real basic and simple didnt really have any vocab....punches were good but didnt hit hard enuff...you gotta throw a lil creativity up in your verse....
wun-u had da betta vocab n erry thing in ya verse...da nice punches...da more complex verse dat's y u got my vote