Voted For: Maximus Meridius

Hmm...this was close.

Metaphor...you had some nice punches and personals. They were hittin' hard, and I was feelin most of them. You were lacking in flow and structure though...make ya lines shorter, or put commas in them. Some lines are too long. Throws the flow way off.

Hammer...better flow and structure than Metaphore. But, your punches and personals, though hard, were slightly...just SLIGHTLY...weaker than Metaphores. This was a close battle, and hard to choose from, but Metaphore gets it. No hate, just elevate.

Voted For: Maximus Meridius

I give this to you for obvious reasons...good opener...and good ending...u had punches thru it and keep it up...

other guy....I think the guys name is simon 'Powell'...and ur verse was aiight...no hate...uppin....

return favour...it's not in sig so click on my username...

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Is that his name is it, Simon Powell?

lmfao at this fuckin inbred

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This was feedback posted for Maximus Meridius
 

Checking polls and like the verses. Both of you had good verses but Max was better.

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Voted For: Maximus Meridius

votin for maximus

ight max got this due to a more creative verse

punches im given them to max his were more creqtive n alot harder. hammer yua punches were a little basic n not hard hitting
Personals- ima give it to max he had some alrifght personals compared to hammer whcihi really didnt see any
strucutre both had a nice strucutre so a tie ont hat category
multies didnt see any outta either one of you
flow- max had a tighter flow then hammer mosyl cuz his verse was more creative

hammer ya vewrse wqasnt the best ive seen outta u elevate on ya punches n personals fam
maximus elevate on your multies fam multies r great in battles

overall:
punches- Max
personals- max
flow- max
multies- neither
strucutre- tie

good battle fams be sure to RTF

good battle
holla

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