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This was feedback posted for Escolayde
 

Holy fuck this battle has been up forever minus votes....

I'll keep it that way...but up it for you...

Voted For: Escolayde

this verse was the best because your flow structure punchlines were simply better and more enjoyable to read I think you had alot of nice wordplay and a few good personals and think this battle was a good one morse code came pretty close but you didn't have good enough punchlines in my opinion my vote goes to Esco return the favour please in my battle

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such a gentleman Redbull, no beef over my diss in that open mic, Daz was like ''yo esco, get on this diss wit me''...then i wrote up a verse dissin all of rv, an he went n posted his solo, so i just posted anyway, no disrespect tho'..

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Voted For: Escolayde

i think esco won because he had good vocab
really hard hittin punches good structure
good multis and a great opener
morse code u had good structure
u need a lil work on ur vocab
u had a pretty good opener
u had some good punches
overall both battles were apretty tight

esco favorite lines:
wanna see somthin drastic? read ya own text.....
u Trynna eat 'beef' ta get 'Phat' so i serve an say ''NEXT''...
fuck punches, put u in a suplex, layed out on ya Back
u should give up rap...
..............talents a lost cause, like a needle in a haystack!
dudes on crack, trynna attack, an act like he own a Mic
only :thumbs up: ya verses get is if u tried ta ''Hitchike''

morse code favorite lines:

Its hunting season kid, and the buck always gets shot
your text woodnt be hot, if i sat your notepad in an oven pot
heres the eveidence that shows the true side to escolayde
a fat internet loving bitch, who more than likely never gets paid

return the favor
link in sig

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Voted For: Escolayde

esco took this. ...........................................

Just making sure I can vote......


Your structure is still mad off, but I think you got it. Your had better punches, personals, and creativitie, thats why I gave you my vote. All you need to do is work on your structure and I think you got it.
Morse code- you verse was ight, but links are out now! I didnt click on em, so that took points away from ur verse cause tha personals were left questionable. Esco took this one homie. No hate. And most of ur personals were a lil played out and not hard hittin
overall-esco took this one with more preperation, creativitie, better punches & personals. no hate to none of yall, cause i dislike both of ya'll, just elevate...

RTF link in sig honest plz.

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Morse, dawg i beat you......
just stop getting my votes removed damnit

okay, the effect vote i agree wit, cause the lame fuck trynna ride me

but me an J have beef, an he still voted...admit defeat dawg. (no hate)

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Voted For: Escolayde

you lost any gained respect, you cant add humor to a death*
THAT many mistakes? im surprised you spelled his name correct**
6...nice opener, gud personal!!
Its hunting season kid, and the buck always gets shot
your text woodnt be hot, if i sat your notepad in an oven pot
6...another gud personal on his name now. 2nd line was played shit!!
heres the eveidence that shows the true side to escolayde
a fat internet loving bitch, who more than likely never gets paid
4...bleh! this line was mainly filler, 2nd line was gay to!!
i mean, wut kinda person takes a girl to mickey dees for a date
He loves beef from BK ***, AND gave out a crew signing 1 dollar bonus rate
7...best line of the verse...gud personal shit!!
And it only makes sense that a fat kid, bitches and calls a FED
join military mindz, cuz in the words of troop, your wack, nuff said
6...gud closer!!

OVERALL: 29/50 (58%)


rhyminz ya worse 'nightmare' i dont fight-fare, hit'cha below the Belt
lay ya lame raps down in ''morse code'' an they still wouldnt be felt..
5...wack opener, 2nd line was shit cuz its braille that is felt......morse code is heard!!!
just playin the cards lord dealt, it aint your fault u a lyrical spastic
you can call my disses blow torch, meltin ya bars like plastic
6...gud line, 2nd line was aight!!
wanna see somthin drastic? read ya own text.....
u Trynna eat 'beef' ta get 'Phat' so i serve an say ''NEXT''...
6...gud line, made me laugh just once!!
fuck punches, put u in a suplex, layed out on ya Back
u should give up rap...
..............talents a lost cause, like a needle in a haystack!
6...decent line, haystack shit was clever!!
dudes on crack, trynna attack, an act like he own a Mic
only :thumbs up: ya verses get is if u tried ta ''Hitchike''
7...LMAO!!! 2nd line was dope!!
fuckin dyke, this pussy gets ''tampered'' with each Night
i think all ya talent ''left'' bitch so why u bother trynna ''right''?
6...average closer, cud've been better!!

OVERALL: 36/60 (60%)

overall a close battle, both had average verses with some played concepts and some lines that cud've been done a lot better. nuthin that caught my attention, just pretty basic shit, creativity was a low, that bold shit is gay now, ppl say links are gay but i like them, nice touch to morse codes verse, i think esco played off ya name better but fucked his opener up wit the 2nd line cuz it shud've been "heard" instead of "felt" at the end so he shud've done 1st line different to get the rhyme. also, morse code dropped that really wack filler line about the fat internet loving bitch, that shit was just gay, not funny at all!! so overall i give it to esco cuz punch wise they were matched, but both dropped a wack line and morse codes was just wacker so Esco gets my vote!!

V/ - Esco

Return the favour...links are in my siggy, ya know what to do!!

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