thanks alot. uppin
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This was feedback posted for Hammer
 

checkin polls Hammer keepin a look out for u
I ssee good shit fam

upppppiiiiin...................................... .................................................

This was feedback posted for Hammer
 

im just peepin' the polls gentlemen...


...the super...

ight upping........................................

Voted For: Parallel

Parallel - Good spit man, your gettin better, punches made sense!

Best Line - I’m reforming u, ya shaking like Bill Cosby in jello commercials
U beating me? it's like saying bill was with being controversial

Worst Line - If ur a hammer then why aint ya hittin wit ya punch lines
I’m like a grizzly bear, yes, ill rip u up any god damn time

Hammer - Good spit man, you had a good flow and hard punches.

Best Line - Kid been changing his name: “Xclusive” to Two By Four
Is it cos parallel’s “special” or thick like a wooden door?

Worst Line - The only RV rapper who sucks as much as Parallel is Affinity
Oh wait…that’s his alias…….there goes his anal virginity

OVERALL - Good battle here, both came hard but Parallel came harder. His flow was better and his punches were hitten harder. Hammer try usin more creativity in your lines.

Vote - Para

thanks alot. uppin............................................. ...........

This was feedback posted for Hammer
 

hey before you start battle rappin' elevate first then hit them hard like the hammer you are... what i see, you need more punches, more metafores and the hole nine... work on your stucture more also, it wouldnt hurt!

Voted For: Parallel

ehh parallel got this easy....

first off...hammer...your first bar was completely played out...and wasnt even a good punch to begin with...2nd bar was ok..decent personal...3rd bar...i wont even say nothin about that....4th...not too good....and 5th...maybe your best bar...still wasnt great though.....Parallel you stayed pretty consistent throughout your whole verse...and thats why you get the win...you had a whole lot of decent punches...that hit decently...and thats what got you this win....a consistent verse...unlike hammers.