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uppin for some things called votes................
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Upping This Bish.....................
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Voted For: Maximus Meridius
- maximus... max- i like the opener shit was original....flow was nice seen better from you...punches came ok thought you coulda done better....idk...structure was good...personals was aight...multism was not that good...i wasnt feelin ya closer.... Jesus-hmm ya opener seemed forced not really feelin it...punches came ok surely you can do better....personals were dope....structure was good...multies hmm...like i said about ya opener they all seemed forced....closer was dope like how ya used a personal at the end.... werd this was a good battle but maximus came a slight better due to the fact that jesus messed up on his multies and opener.... /maximus meridius |
Voted For: Jesus Escobar
Aii ima Break This Down like .........Wateva Jesus escobar Max got that lemon flow, submit sour posts, this cowards dead Think you garden against me? fuck dirt naps, sleep in my flower bed LOL Aii opener Nice start Plays nice and dick sucks, only way this homo ca' live Blow ya brains on train tracks and give him loco-motives Umm Dat Bar Was aii Ur a-nat-ta-me crushed with ease, while ya bitch blow this The anatomy brushed aside with my keys, your bars are shit .....Nope..... Ya actions smell wack someone plz give em some mo mints Your final life line went flat, with more name changes then Prince Dat was Aii This prick knows it and I got better wordplay to go with And if my punches was heat seekin well, I'd have no hits ......LOL ...Nice I don't have any heavy drops?make one when I trip this fat kid I diss-play’d lines like urs to show what wack is first line was aii .....2nd?,.....Nope...... I displayed how his verse and Q's sexual preference is the same Come on homo, your crew is like "who?" when I said your name Nice Closer Overall: You did aii But Some Lines jus werent mixin together but some lines was like .....:D Maximus Meridus I've Beaten This Kid With No Words, Like Instrumentals This Kid Couldn't Spit Straight So He Got Himself Stencils Umm couldve done Betta You Beating Me Is, Retards Concentrating On Tight Ropes Skill Is One Of The Things You Lack Something Like Votes .......Nice.....but not dope I'll Have His Skull Going Both Ways Like His Moms Legs Cracking Every Bone In His Body, Like Broken 2 Eggs.. ........Nope....... This Kid Pose To Be Dope? And 15 Lines Is Even Bars? Phat Mic, I Don't Got To Discuss How Whack You Are .......Punch?......Come on mayne Call Me God Coz I'm Sonning This Kid Like He's My Own Like Depth Gamblers, He's Mad I'm Taking Away His Home ........Nice..... Chances Of Beating Me Is Slim, Like Bush Opening The Border I'm Abusing This Kid Verbally, In Need Or A Restraining Order ........Alright....... You Wouldn't Beat Me, If This Site Was Made Of Mexicans Kid Can Get Troop To Write For Him And Wont Win Text Again Nice Ender ...........And Some Kinda Personal LOL OVERALL: Ima Have to go With Jesu Escobar on this one becuase he had some terrific Punchez Ateast compared to Maximus and He hade some good bars that were really Workin Together RTF the links in MY Sig Thanx |
Voted For: Maximus Meridius
phat mic that was weak, uh the stucture was good the syllable count was good, but your creativty lacked, your punchlines werent hitting and when you face a guy like Maximus your gonna need soem vocabulary cuz max always has somin up his sleeve. but work on ya stuff a bit 1 Maximus Nice stucutre, nice flow good syllable count at most, but hat got me to vote for you was the creativty and the wordplay, the actual punchlines were hitting and you had some nice vocabulary, the personals werent really there but you had the wordplay and just way better verse overal. peace out |
Voted For: Maximus Meridius
maximus wins. phat mic, u had a nice structure, good rhymes and some nice metas n wordplay,but i didndt actually spot a punch in ya shit, all ya bars were jus statements.. i.e..Plays nice and dick sucks, only way this homo ca' live Blow ya brains on train tracks and give him loco-motives ^^see..nice wordplay ..but the punch is like non-existant max..u came harder wit tha punches thats why u take this,your opener was your best bar for me.. nice job |
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