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Break your teeth & lets all see who will be the one to get last laugh
He said there’s something up his crack...
.................................................. ....but that’s my foot in his ass
Only words your good at saying is: “I can own your ass you bastard”
But the only thing you’ve really been good at was being a coward
Pick this homo-slob up on his feet, & then knock his ass in the chin
SKAAL’s best line would be when he saw the battle & checked in
I see you have a couple of punches, but I’m still laughing at you
Cuz I had called some1 wack, but I was actually talking to you

I can tell u were rushing becuz I've seen better from u but overall your verse beat SKALL

I'm A Bout To Bless This Dude Wit Tight Lines On This Loose~beef
You Aint 'skriptz' You Is Crayon Skribbled On Loose~leaf
On Tha World~wide~web But You Aint Known On Two~streets
U Burgaler~turned~fed Like Martin On Blue~streak
Shake Ya Head All You Want Like Shots Don't Go Thru~cheeks
Too~weak At Ya Show They 'walkin Out' Like Slewed~feet
Words Burn Ya Chest This Is 8 Thousand Proof~speech
You'll Need Yao Mixed Wit Shaq And That's Just Half Of My True~reach..............
Get At Me


This wuz a hot verse but i would give this To Skripts man this is a close battle man u culd elevate a bit more though both emcees stay up
plz reurn the favor pick a battle in the sig and vote plz

sorry I can't vote yet............................................... ......................

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Voted For: skriptz

Chea Dis Is What It Is

SKAAL
I'm A Bout To Bless This Dude Wit Tight Lines On This Loose~beef
You Aint 'skriptz' You Is Crayon Skribbled On Loose~leaf
.. :) Good Opener
On Tha World~wide~web But You Aint Known On Two~streets
U Burgaler~turned~fed Like Martin On Blue~streak
.. First line was aii But the second ,.,,,,.. :(
Shake Ya Head All You Want Like Shots Don't Go Thru~cheeks
Too~weak At Ya Show They 'walkin Out' Like Slewed~feet
... Umm... That was aii
Words Burn Ya Chest This Is 8 Thousand Proof~speech
You'll Need Yao Mixed Wit Shaq And That's Just Half Of My True~reach..............
..... Not Tryna hate ,......I Think I Heard It B4 But Aii

Overall Only 2/4 Of ya verse was Aii The rest you sort of feel off but still you got some hot style But Skriptz gets my vote

Skriptz
Break your teeth & lets all see who will be the one to get last laugh
He said there’s something up his crack...
.................................................. ....but that’s my foot in his ass
....Nice Opener :)
Only words your good at saying is: “I can own your ass you bastard”
But the only thing you’ve really been good at was being a coward
Umm.... Not all dat :(
Pick this homo-slob up on his feet, & then knock his ass in the chin
SKAAL’s best line would be when he saw the battle & checked in
:roll: OMG never heard that B4
I see you have a couple of punches, but I’m still laughing at you
Cuz I had called some1 wack, but I was actually talking to you
>.... that was aii ....still Laughin from that other Bar

You did Fairly well Ive seen you do way Much Betta than this BUT still You brought ENouf to win tha Battle so I give you all props

Please RTF in the Link In my sig Please(It was a str8 merkin so funny bcuz the dude suck ) :roll: youll see when you get there .....NO HATE VOTIN SKAAL

Voted For: SKAAL

very close battle no hate 2 either of yall
heres my feedback

skaal
I'm A Bout To Bless This Dude Wit Tight Lines On This Loose~beef
You Aint 'skriptz' You Is Crayon Skribbled On Loose~leaf
On Tha World~wide~web But You Aint Known On Two~streets
U Burgaler~turned~fed Like Martin On Blue~streak
Shake Ya Head All You Want Like Shots Don't Go Thru~cheeks
Too~weak At Ya Show They 'walkin Out' Like Slewed~feet
Words Burn Ya Chest This Is 8 Thousand Proof~speech
You'll Need Yao Mixed Wit Shaq And That's Just Half Of My True~reach..............

good personals
like sum of ur punches
elevate sum more
work on structure
sum lines were hard 2 undastand
7/10

skriptz
Break your teeth & lets all see who will be the one to get last laugh
He said there’s something up his crack...
.................................................. ....but that’s my foot in his ass
Only words your good at saying is: “I can own your ass you bastard”
But the only thing you’ve really been good at was being a coward
Pick this homo-slob up on his feet, & then knock his ass in the chin
SKAAL’s best line would be when he saw the battle & checked in
I see you have a couple of punches, but I’m still laughing at you
Cuz I had called some1 wack, but I was actually talking to you

not 2 many punches
iight personals
easy 2 read structure
elevate sum more
6.5/10

my v/ skaal

ay yall check out my battle vs. the kid please leave adequate feedback and a vote 4 da betta battler
holla back yall

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

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vote people....

Voted For: skriptz

Skriptz
Break your teeth & lets all see who will be the one to get last laugh
He said there’s something up his crack...
.................................................. ....but that’s my foot in his ass
Decent opener...7.5/10
Only words your good at saying is: “I can own your ass you bastard”
But the only thing you’ve really been good at was being a coward
decent could have been worded better 7/10
Pick this homo-slob up on his feet, & then knock his ass in the chin
SKAAL’s best line would be when he saw the battle & checked in
Lmao ...8/10
I see you have a couple of punches, but I’m still laughing at you
Cuz I had called some1 wack, but I was actually talking to you
Decent closer , could have been better 7/10

overall :30/40

SKAAL:
I'm A Bout To Bless This Dude Wit Tight Lines On This Loose~beef
You Aint 'skriptz' You Is Crayon Skribbled On Loose~leaf
Not really feeling it could have been alot better 6/10
On Tha World~wide~web But You Aint Known On Two~streets
U Burgaler~turned~fed Like Martin On Blue~streak
No...sorry .. 4/10
Shake Ya Head All You Want Like Shots Don't Go Thru~cheeks
Too~weak At Ya Show They 'walkin Out' Like Slewed~feet
Decent ... 7/10
Words Burn Ya Chest This Is 8 Thousand Proof~speech
You'll Need Yao Mixed Wit Shaq And That's Just Half Of My True~reach..............
??..self glories...really not feeling it 6/10

overall:23/40

overall vote: Skriptz

Voted For: SKAAL

sorry skriptz but skaal got u on dis one...no hate though...lemme tell u

skriptz:
Break your teeth & lets all see who will be the one to get last laugh
He said there’s something up his crack...
.................................................. ....but that’s my foot in his ass
^^uhhh...not really feelin it
Only words your good at saying is: “I can own your ass you bastard”
But the only thing you’ve really been good at was being a coward
^^^weak punch nigga...i seen betta from u!
Pick this homo-slob up on his feet, & then knock his ass in the chin
SKAAL’s best line would be when he saw the battle & checked in
^^ohh...now u doin it
I see you have a couple of punches, but I’m still laughing at you
Cuz I had called some1 wack, but I was actually talking to you
^^^aw damn man...naw

skaal:
I'm A Bout To Bless This Dude Wit Tight Lines On This Loose~beef
You Aint 'skriptz' You Is Crayon Skribbled On Loose~leaf
^^iight...not dat good to me tho
On Tha World~wide~web But You Aint Known On Two~streets
U Burgaler~turned~fed Like Martin On Blue~streak
^^^yeah...dat was hot
Shake Ya Head All You Want Like Shots Don't Go Thru~cheeks
Too~weak At Ya Show They 'walkin Out' Like Slewed~feet
^^^whoa...if its bout his avy...den thumbs up for thinkin bout dat!
Words Burn Ya Chest This Is 8 Thousand Proof~speech
You'll Need Yao Mixed Wit Shaq And That's Just Half Of My True~reach
^^^wasnt really feelin it dat much

so my vote goes to skaal...only cuz he had betta punches and personals...both of yall could have done much betta tho...1

-DB

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