This was feedback posted for BLACK
 

This was feedback posted for Tony Green
 

checkin pollz.....................................

Come yall 2 more votes and its over!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Voted For: Tony Green

Good shit Tony Green. Nothing too crazy, but definitely strong. I like the Webber line, nice.

Not bad shit for Black either, but a bit weaker than Tony.

Props to yall.

iight thanxx uppin to win 1 more vote!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

uppin 1 more vote!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Voted For: Tony Green

I'll treat you like another planet and put you outta this world.
My shells gone make your blood drip like gel from rick james curl.
wack punch
You try to guess what I'm gone say but my style to clever.
You claim that you king but you rank 76 like webber*
cant say this is played
You better play your position, otherwise you'll be missing, found dead in the river now you sleepin with fishes.
No Problem with the scraps I'll let them get ate by pigeons.
flow = too long, weak punch
Black serve niggaz with an open mouth like he work at a diner.
My lyrics just left you burning like your moms vagina.
weak punch


u tony green wit no money must be an oximoron
im black wit bread so dats an oximoron
nah
u weaka than mike jordan boots so imma kill you
u a cock suckin fag ass, crab niggaz will drill u
what?, stupid
and dont talk bout me and expect punches to land
cuz 99.9% of tha time u be wrong, read ya verse and do da math
…….no mayn
im a punchline away from makin dis fag beg mercy
learn how to spell "muthafucka" before u try to approach me*
no

overall tony green took this one, had harder punches than black, & the structure
needs help, but both of you need to elevate tho, no hate