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Voted For: The Black Plague

plagues rhymes aint complex, theyre simplistic...and personally
i think his crew initials stand for Lacking All Diversity
weak punch
hes not set out to be a rapper, thats no lie its a known fact
title says he speaks the truth so his whole verse should say "IM WACK"
decent
and does he like girls? nah...plague is not what he seems
invitin ya boy to play musical chairs...with 1 seat
wack
and he might be 18...but he hasnt gone through as much as he should
like getting respect from others...or beating someone good
…nope, weak punch here



I’l drop you so easy leave ya’ll thinking “wheres the beef” like commercials
Kid u must me masochistic since u battled me, cuz u askin me to hurt you
decent
If good hygiene meant good rhymes, you would only be showerin once a week
Only difference between you and a fridge is it don’t fart when u pull out the meat
weak punch here
Takin this win wasn’t much of a feat, so I wont brag about it after I beat you
Honestly, you were through before you could say “hi plague, nice to meet you”
pretty decent
You must be a constipated ass fart, cuz you claimin “you can’t pass me”
hop off 9th’d dick, u aint shit.. To him, u just a Mexican piece of ass meat
don’t know if he is Mexican, kinda get this line, it was aight tho…

compose – you had an aight drop, almost weak punches throughout the whole
thing tho…ur structure was aight & the vocab was okay too, should’ve added some
personas in there, & harder punches, & you prolly would’ve won…

tbp – you had an aight drop too, some punches weren’t as hard as I thought they
would be…your vocab was good, structure was aight here, could’ve added more
personas in there, not your best battle, seen better, but overall you came decent

This was feedback posted for final
 

damn i just noticed i can't vote..it was close but compose edged it out a lil...imma leave feed anyhow.....
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I’l drop you so easy leave ya’ll thinking “wheres the beef” like commercials*
Kid u must me masochistic since u battled me, cuz u askin me to hurt you**
^^decent opener...weak punch though
If good hygiene meant good rhymes, you would only be showerin once a week
Only difference between you and a fridge is it don’t fart when u pull out the meat
^^rofl...funny shit(srry fam)
Takin this win wasn’t much of a feat, so I wont brag about it after I beat you
Honestly, you were through before you could say “hi plague, nice to meet you”
^^nah, more filler then anything
You must be a constipated ass fart, cuz you claimin “you can’t pass me”***
hop off 9th’d dick, u aint shit.. To him, u just a Mexican piece of ass meat
^^good concept in ya first line but its worded like your dissin yaself...2nd line ruined it....
you did have a funny ass bar though...decent plague
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plagues rhymes aint complex, theyre simplistic...and personally
i think his crew initials stand for Lacking All Diversity
^^i dont know what crew hes in...but decent
hes not set out to be a rapper, thats no lie its a known fact
title says he speaks the truth so his whole verse should say "IM WACK"
^^nice....feeling it
and does he like girls? nah...plague is not what he seems
invitin ya boy to play musical chairs...with 1 seat
^^rofl......k, that ties your gay jokes up...lol
and he might be 18...but he hasnt gone through as much as he should
like getting respect from others...or beating someone good
^^decent closer.....
just more consistent final/compose...
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not voting just feedback...RTF IN THE SIG

Skriptz... U want me to RTF?? If u got any open battles jus drop a link

Voted For: The Black Plague

This was a pretty weak battle but black took this one

Black
I’l drop you so easy leave ya’ll thinking “wheres the beef” like commercials*
Kid u must me masochistic since u battled me, cuz u askin me to hurt you**
Decent opener , could have been worded better
If good hygiene meant good rhymes, you would only be showerin once a week
Only difference between you and a fridge is it don’t fart when u pull out the meat
Not feeling this
Takin this win wasn’t much of a feat, so I wont brag about it after I beat you
Honestly, you were through before you could say “hi plague, nice to meet you”
Decent
You must be a constipated ass fart, cuz you claimin “you can’t pass me”***
hop off 9th’d dick, u aint shit.. To him, u just a Mexican piece of ass meat
He's Mexican? word..lol... decent closer

Compose
plagues rhymes aint complex, theyre simplistic...and personally
i think his crew initials stand for Lacking All Diversity
Nice opener
hes not set out to be a rapper, thats no lie its a known fact
title says he speaks the truth so his whole verse should say "IM WACK"
Not feeling this one , could have been alot better
and does he like girls? nah...plague is not what he seems
invitin ya boy to play musical chairs...with 1 seat
Decent
and he might be 18...but he hasnt gone through as much as he should
like getting respect from others...or beating someone good
Could have been better,okay


overall- this was a close battle but imahave to hand this one to black ,he came alittle harder to me , and used some okay personals , final just came alittle to weak, and thats why he lost ..

vote- Black

Aiite uppin this ya'll.. Drop some votes and i'll return the favor

^yea rtf for me...since my battles are gettin slept on

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Voted For: The Black Plague

v/ TBP

It was a close battle but honestly plague came through with punches. punches win battles, and plague had better harder ones. compose's was funnier, and had meta's but you need to have multis personals punches, flow, and similies to win a battle and tbp was better in these catergories. good battle no hate.

Voted For: final

Compose:

plagues rhymes aint complex, theyre simplistic...and personally
i think his crew initials stand for Lacking All Diversity
^^good bar nice personal 7/10
hes not set out to be a rapper, thats no lie its a known fact
title says he speaks the truth so his whole verse should say "IM WACK"
^^another good bar 6/10
and does he like girls? nah...plague is not what he seems
invitin ya boy to play musical chairs...with 1 seat
^^ fire bar real original 10/10
and he might be 18...but he hasnt gone through as much as he should
like getting respect from others...or beating someone good
^^ehh ok 4/10

overall: 27/40 (68%)

TBP:

I’l drop you so easy leave ya’ll thinking “wheres the beef” like commercials*
Kid u must me masochistic since u battled me, cuz u askin me to hurt you**
^^good metas wack punches 5/10
If good hygiene meant good rhymes, you would only be showerin once a week
Only difference between you and a fridge is it don’t fart when u pull out the meat
^^ lmao good bar 8/10
Takin this win wasn’t much of a feat, so I wont brag about it after I beat you
Honestly, you were through before you could say “hi plague, nice to meet you”
^^no 3/10
You must be a constipated ass fart, cuz you claimin “you can’t pass me”***
hop off 9th’d dick, u aint shit.. To him, u just a Mexican piece of ass meat
^^whats with all this talk of meat ? 4/10

overall: 22/40 (55%)

Vote: Compose

Aiite upppin thanks for the votes

Voted For: The Black Plague

aight battle but final has came harder b4

compose-seems like your verse jsut didnt have anything really that good in it...the only punches that came close to hitting were the 2nd and 4th lines...coodve improved on tons of stuff, like multies, punches, werdplay, opener, closer, and vocab...3/10

TBP-loved your verse... my favorite line was the one bout farting after takin the meat out, that was nice...you also had alright vocab...the only things i didnt like about your verse was that they coodve had more multies and9 it also seemed like it got worse as the end of it approached...nice verse though...6/10

v/ the black plague

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