uppin........ tryout for E.F.

ya this was aiight...I like that nok jersey line...7/10

yeah, i didn't think you kept a steady level of enjoyment, some lines were shitty, but some were pretty dope, and other i laughed at.....but whatever, first one back, keep up, it was decent to read, flow seemed off at times you, felt like you forced some shit and stretched some lines, you had some good multies and inners there, so, just fix some shit up and you be rollin again, word........keep up man........haha, ending made me luagh..pz