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Voted For: Kid*Kapone

EHH nothing great both need elevation but in the end Kid got this just for the plain fact that he wasn't as whack as Dfunk

D you really need to check your rhymin the massacre line didn't rhyme with anything the wordplay you attempted didn't connect AT ALL your opener was straight whack the only close to god bar was the drummer boy thing but even that was weak overall your verse was a 2.3/10

Kid your verse was better but nothing great you attempted metas had some ok multies but overall you took this battle with this line

...........this nigga a dumbass he tried to post in his verse in Image titan.....

that made me laugh but work on structure try makin the words size 1 and centering your lines overal verse 4.1/10

V/ Kid Kapone


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Voted For: Kid*Kapone

RTF in the link in my sig Please I only need one more
Aii This is What I Think

Dfunk

You need some elevtaion I Think that you Shouldnt put ya verses into "stanza'z" Bcuz that makes it look like your typin a story and that makes it look tha much boring ......I think Tha you should try a style change *jus a suggestion*
But you didnt do very well In this battle But maybe next time

Kid*kapone
Now you didnt do th ebest but you did enough to win this battle i feel that you need to work on ya structure A whole lot LOL bcuz tha shit is Fucked up :roll: i like ya style though Keep up the good work And youll do wat you do

RTF in the Link in my sig...........Please I only need ONE more PLEASE

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