up this shit ya'll
help a brotha out

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Voted For: Kid*Kapone

good battle you two..
Kid~nice,strong opener to start this off,LOL@your 2nd bar, queer eye line...strong punchlines..lol @ "your sig is fabulous"..funny lines as well, your verse continues to flow well and your closer is strong and witty, overall good drop, great vocabulary used here too..1
lyrical~opener was ok, could have been better written.you had some decent lines, your punches were good, some,like all the capone lines seemed like filler, i liked the windy city line, that was witty, i saw where you were trying to go with this, i just dont think you were as creative overall, or came full force like your
oponent did, closer was good, but your whole verse wasnt tied together well, like it was all over the place, but good job overall you two..1

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Voted For: Kid*Kapone

Aii This Is what it is

Kid*Kapone
Aii I Think that you opened up ya verse Kinda weak but near the end you brought up the fire But Sometimes that might cost you a lost bcuz the beging is weak and that might make somebody loose intrest in ya Verse and jus automatically give th ebattle to the other person without even readin they verse Believe me there are ppl out there like that so next time COme in hard and leave out hard

^ My Vote

Lyrical Clarity

I think That you shouldnt Speak outta anger or jus sayin stuff that ryme .....Use your head when you battle put 2 & 2 together and think of some sick shit mayne i know you can bcuz you got that potential ....... when you battle even if you got beef with that person dont Speak ALL outta hate ....maybe some outta hate but not all ....Use ya head make your oppenent look stupid ....Youll win bcz you got the main potential .....I feel that you can do betta than this 4sho

RTF in the link in my sig ..... I str8 merked some dude :roll: < thats what I did when i read his verse