Voted For: Skriptz

This was a pretty decent battle but ima have to give this one to skriptz...

Skriptz.


mcskitlz at me with some weak punches, like them shits would hurt me*
You can’t spell skittles, & I thought your disses were directly to your family
Decent opener, could have been better
I’ve seen your previous battles, & already you have no damn technique
Compare my other rhymes to yours...and it looks like you came weak
nope
He answered my callout, and put his fists up, like he wanted to fight
It’s kinda funny how you can’t rap, but yet you picking up the MIC
Decent
Funny how you thinking you tough, seems you like to wear pink t-shirts
And your mom’s told me that you had almost died of rug burn at birth
Okay closer...could have been alot better

LexiKon


My flow kill "emcee's" like SARS i'll get you "$ik with it"[1]
You want this win PM your D/R's oops thats "...Xplizit...."[2]
1st lines was good died at the end
You couldn't conect with "Solid Punches" if you threw "Frozen Juice Packets"
Bitch pretends so much he deserves a new acomplishment "RV's best actress"[3]
Nice
And if this "ACTOR" can "FREESTYLE" whats with all the "Skriptz" [4]
First time this dude ducked me it felt like I "Meta-Bitch"[5]
nope
And after this run in he'll change his alias quick[6]
So people won't remeber him as the dude who PRE-WRIT[7]
He prewrite? ...not feelin it

overall vote- Skriptz

Voted For: Skriptz

close battle....


He answered my callout, and put his fists up, like he wanted to fight
It’s kinda funny how you can’t rap, but yet you picking up the MIC
I really liked this...

I’ve seen your previous battles, & already you have no damn technique
Compare my other rhymes to yours...and it looks like you came weak
this was petty good...
over all i liked yours better

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Voted For: LexiKon

Flow: Blah its text
Punches: Lex
Personals: Lex
Wordplay: Lex
Metas: Tie
Multis: Neither
Enjoyment: Eh iono

Vote: LexiKon

Explanation :Lexikon was way more personal thats why he gets my vote .. also he was more complex which makes a big difference .. only thing i dont like is dont explain ur verse so much if people dont get it fully then u did a bad job wit it and right here u didnt need all those explanations .. stay up 1

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Voted For: LexiKon

i think lex took this one.
skriptz-ok verse, but i think u need to work on a lot of stuff. yo verse was ight, but i seen no creativitie in it. some of the punches and personals were ight, but i just wasnt feelin it. sry.
lex-i gave u tha vote, cause i felt you came harder on wordplay, and personals. yo verse was dope to me, and creative. tha explainin shit was kinda unneccessary, and the links were too, but thats just a small bump in this, i dont think it hurt you in this battle. i stil think you took this one. better structure, and your verse looked more organized.
overall-one sided battle, and my vote goes to Lexikon.

v/lex

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Voted For: LexiKon

lmfao dis nigga strait killed skriptz yo man he did da same shit 2 me made me waste credits den dont chekk in lexikon verse was mean threw da whole thing he had sum fire ass punches dat realli hit him hard he had dem nice ass personals and dey played off hiz name da explanatins 2 follow each line lmao dis nigga took it wit eaze if otha niggaz voted against him its kuzz dey on hiz dikk

skriptz ya shit was simple da first bar aint even rhyme hurt/family?da fukk iz u on u aint have no personalz shit stayed basic da whole verse dem punches was horrible on sum real shit u kept ya whole verse basic i wasnt feelin it so u dont get da win 4 dat

v-lexikon got dis by eaze

Voted For: LexiKon

mcskitlz at me with some weak punches, like them shits would hurt me*
You can’t spell skittles, & I thought your disses were directly to your family
^^wasnt feeling the punch homie
I’ve seen your previous battles, & already you have no damn technique
Compare my other rhymes to yours...and it looks like you came weak
^^flow fell off n kinda simple.....
He answered my callout, and put his fists up, like he wanted to fight
It’s kinda funny how you can’t rap, but yet you picking up the MIC
^^??...srry man really not feeling this bar either
Funny how you thinking you tough, seems you like to wear pink t-shirts
And your mom’s told me that you had almost died of rug burn at birth
^^this was funny....not a bad closer.....
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it seemed you either didnt try or didnt care...or just aint good...but you had 1 bar that was decent(closer) other then that i felt ya verse was just lacking in punches n personals...
if the personals were there(i didnt see them or get em)
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My flow kill "emcee's" like SARS i'll get you "$ik with it"[1]
You want this win PM your D/R's oops thats "...Xplizit...."[2]
^^decent opener............but simple
You couldn't conect with "Solid Punches" if you threw "Frozen Juice Packets"
Bitch pretends so much he deserves a new acomplishment "RV's best actress"[3]
^^2nd line was koo.....
And if this "ACTOR" can "FREESTYLE" whats with all the "Skriptz" [4]
First time this dude ducked me it felt like I "Meta-Bitch"[5]
^^decent name play
And after this run in he'll change his alias quick[6]
So people won't remeber him as the dude who PRE-WRIT[7]
^^weak closer..but i got the jist//...
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well imma go with lex, 2nd bar was koo n it was the most creative outta both verses..you both need to try harder or elevate ya verses n punches...to much simplicity from what ive read in this battle....
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RTF .in the sig.........if ya want

Voted For: Skriptz

ok, first thing I gotta say as I was reading both verses. FAKE PERSONALS=WACK, and take away from yo verse, especially when the voters knows it's fake. He wasn't metaskriptz. Meta still here. But w/e to the verses:

Yours:
1. SARs lines are played
2. ok, concept been used before, but it's iight
-Frozen juice punch was nice
3. umm... ok? not really hard hitting.
4. big deal, but yea, it's ok, I guess
5. not him, false. so wack
6. didn't need explanation for it
7. ok....

blah.. yo verse was aiight. Not really anything hard hitting. Don't jus state stuff you usin' as a personal. Actually put it into a punch. Not that great of a verse, but eh. And you said not to hate on yo explanations, but fo reel, when your explanations bigger than yo verse... you kno you got a problem. lol

now to skriptz:

didn't really get what the skittles line about.
-second one is ok
-third punch
-um, too simple but it's aiight.
-closer is what won you this nbattle. Cuz I was gonna say he won, till I saw this shit. lool tight shit. Sayin' his body pink, from the rug burns. I liked this. Actually only decent punch in whole battle.

very wack battle, but skriptz got it wit the closer. pc

Voted For: LexiKon

Skriptz's middle bars were alright, but everything flanking them was weak..

Lex had personals galore, punches were heavy....only thing is you didn't need to explain most of those, it was pretty easy to connect the dots..wordplay on the Solid Punches bit was nice...that's why I threw my vote to Lex

Upin This Battle Been Slet On For To Long