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return da favor ya'll link in my sig
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uppin this shit once again...............................
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This was feedback posted for KiNg SoLo
decent verse, sum played lynes, but decent 4 text..
the acrostic shit almost hit its mark, n the flow was easy.. |
Ight King solo 1st
^^ He checked out this little shit and then Acuity looked perplexed… I see u can’t understand ?? Well after all u did admit u sucked at text… Acuity learn how to battle u ho, I’ll give u time to go “read-my-threads”… How you even get votes when ure shit gets slept on like “king-size-beds”… ^^^Opener was weak, the personal was prolly good, iono i cbf clickin the damn link slept on punch is prolly the most played shit on the net, come with more original shit My skillz x 12 Linez = me winnin…I multiply my lyrics like mathematics… U ain’t got shit on me, u belong wit herbz! Bunch of certified wack-addicts… I admit…Ure Shit! Just Quit! Didn’t think I’d have to beat on a fellow Brit… Tha way u spit, it’ll be like smokin weed wit a druggy, u’ll never get a hit… ^^lmao @ rhymin mathematics with wack-addicts.. druggy punch was ight.. Wit u blowin gas u’ll never surpass my class when I got multies in mass… But Alas! I must end this, u can have an acute vision of me ownin ure ass… KING SOLO JUST WHORED you, but I got a nice spot for u on my shelf… What to call it……I KNOW!! Ass Clowns United, RV Insists That You go there, they even wanted to help… ^^ ownin ur ass was a bit homo.. closer was waaaaaay stretched man.. but lyke i said in the feed, it almost hit.. now for Ac Like Mase your wack, and just like him, only 3 or 4 ppl care that your back Failed to elevate despite ur every endeavour, I'll win this cos I'm "Jus Plain Better*" ^^opener was weak, try not to use the werd 'lyke' 2wice in one lyne.. next lyne was ok.. "The Revolution Has Begun"**, as ppl here witness the fall of this "king's" empire Steal a win of me? got bout as much chance of gettin away with it as winona ryder ^^ 1st lyne was not a punch.. winona ryder is played.. His rhymes old and played like ancient musical relics, his rhymes pathetic Im a physicist, so ill equate him like solving equations in physics ^^ the schem/flow here is all out man, think about what u writin b4 'and' aftah u ryte it.. Every1 knows this "king" a homo, thats why he still single and "solo" He places an ad every week, with a hidden message behind.... "looking 4 a queen" ^^ thius is betetr, u got a setup, then a punch.. u need more bars lyke this.. still this was weak.. He branded himself with a parental advisory for kickin "infinte-lyrikz***" Cos ppl need to be warned that even tho he's wack he just keeps spittin very weak closer man.. save ur best punches 4 opener & closer.. Overall.. My vote = King Solo he got a 5 / 10, as opposed to Ac's 3 / 10 RespecK 1 |
& btw its tellin me I've already voted on the poll, even tho thats a lie..
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uppin ma'fuckas................... .................................
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uppin this ma'fucka!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Voted For: KiNg SoLo
Haha...a'ight in all honesty this battle was one-sided...King Solo came sooo much harder...Acuity...your punches really weren't landing hard...your structure was fucked...Which made your flow go off...and your rhyme scheme was a little bit off too...some lines didn't rhyme with eachother, they had multies in them, but there wasnt a second lin to follow...just work on that. King Solo...some pretty nice punches, some decent personals...Structure was good, flow was nice...you took this just for an overall better verse. Return the favor on me against OneStepBeyond...link is in my sig. |
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bump to end dis mofo..............gd battle king solo...i giv u da win at 3-0..nice 1, close dis mofo :thumbup:
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yo uppin........................ ........................
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