Vote 4 Dumb-D-Dumb. All those votes were fusure dick ryds

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Nice battle Dumb-D-Dumb


But You Was Dumb to even try me

Voted For: Dumb-D-Dumb

okay......

stanza....man, alot of your shit was whack...like that same sex mother line, i think you just picked things that would rhyme cool, your shit lacked complexity, context, and creativity....nothing special at all....your finisher had potential....but your wording was garbage and the set up line ended up being stretched....so, this isn't that great compared to what ive seen you write, and you didn't really stay consistent
I set the marker for skill, like im in a Tourney~With~Flaws
U couldnt *Pass The Bar* if u were and Attorney~At~Law
^ that = not a diss
after reading this battle...you need to elevate....word

dumbdumb or whatever....thought you came harder....actually throwing punches directed at stanze...good playing off his name there......word, i think you can get a little more complex with your punches though, add some more wordplay and shit....but overall, you took this battle, stanza was just babbling and rhyming cool, you actually dissed him pretty much every bar, so you get my vote

v/dumbndumb

This was feedback posted for Dumb-D-Dumb
 

A'ight...this was a close battle...I ain' gonna vote, 'cause Dumb-D is my dumbass younger brother...but close, props to both. :cool:

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Voted For: Stanza

im givin ratins for tha barz..here we go...

stanza:
My rhymes *pack* punch like supermarket teens on picnics
But ya *flow* is off like automatic learners driving stick-shift
was iight...7/10
I set the marker for skill, like im in a Tourney~With~Flaws
U couldnt *Pass The Bar* if u were and Attorney~At~Law
didnt get tha first part but still iight...5/10
Im mentally~advanced, while ur experimentally~in~trance
My rhymes*shock u*like seeing a vampire in a glass
lost tha structure and flow a bit...5/10
This *dickhead* covers his * face* like a latex~rubber
He claims to be str8 wen he fucks his same~sex~mother
bad punch man...3/10
ya rhymes BORIN, like MIMES WIT MIC's & ya rhyme skill less
You Make Dumb Dumbz Look Like the definition of illness
no no no...but iight a lil...5/10

ddd:
your name is a poetry term, but man you just a clown/
ya your poetry is deep....burried six feet underground/*
shitty opener...4/10
you wanted 10 lines, because your afraid to do more/
I understand you there....cuz I could beat you in four/
didnt hit...5/10
ya name is 'stanza'? well it doesnt fit, ya structures wack/
you seperate ya lines...so how is ya poetic verses intact?/**
iight right there...7/10
Luda in ya sig...dawg, is this guy your fuckin idol?/
Wit a role model like that...you lack talent so vital!/
no...not doin shit...bad punch...3/10
man face it...you cant win this battle, broken hoe/
A loss a kick-in-the balls...this my lyrical Roshambo!/***
oh hell no...dont jus pull a cartoon term outta nowhere...1/10

its like dis...ddd, ya verse was no landin no hits...might have been betta if u wrote it first...stanza, ya shit wasnt all dat either but at least u got sum good shit goin...

v=stanza

-DB