Voted For: DAZZLE

DAZZLE - you were weak but better than Dumb-D-Dumb... you punchlines hit and your structure was iiight... your flow was better than Dumb-D-Dumb..keep working hard. 5/10

Dumb-D-Dumb - you were WEAK..i cant even understand your freestlye....your punchlines and flow was sorry..your structure is bad 2/10

This was feedback posted for Dumb-D-Dumb
 

dont feel like votin, but i liked your verse better. it just seemed to flow more.

Voted For: Dumb-D-Dumb

Ima "beat" this bitch harder than I "beat a drum"...
You admit your thick......your "dumber than dumb"!!!
^^c'mon...gotta do better than dat
These lines are priceless.....kinda like a packed treasure chest....
This aint a contest, you couldnt be "posotive"...if you had a blood test!
^^wak
Only live with your mum and not your dad..... whats up you only love her?
You must have bad family problems....if you'd snitch on your own brother!
^^well,a decent personal

Conclusion-When a guy has a name like dumb-d-dumb,you gotta rip it badly.That 2nd punchline was too basic.The 3rd punch at least hit because it was a personal.

my bro peeped your battle, and LE says you spit shit
only way you "dazzle"........ is the glitter on ya lipstick
^^decent
pmed me to call me out, but you don't seem energetic
cuz your skill is basically what you are, just plain pathetic
^^wak,flow was good
pmed me again, you dropped six lines, just for me to chew through
truth is, I know feather pillows that hit harder than you do
^^played out and too basic.

Conclusion-uR problem is not having enough personals.Ur 1st bar was the best in this whole battle.THis was a weak battle.That last line us played out as fuck.Eminem himself used a line like dat in a freestyle.Off cource...he used the line better and made it hit harder.Weak verse,but ya still won.

Vote-Dumb~1~

This was feedback posted for DAZZLE
 

word to my alias, damn you dope son...............

and K your thick son, now take your ass to frot lines.

Voted For: Dumb-D-Dumb

my bro peeped your battle, and LE says you spit shit
only way you "dazzle"........ is the glitter on ya lipstick
—1st line was wack, 2nd was okay
pmed me to call me out, but you don't seem energetic
cuz your skill is basically what you are, just plain pathetic
—decent
pmed me again, you dropped six lines, just for me to chew through
truth is, I know feather pillows that hit harder than you do
—ur best line here



Ima "beat" this bitch harder than I "beat a drum"...
You admit your thick......your "dumber than dumb"!!!
—wackness
These lines are priceless.....kinda like a packed treasure chest....
This aint a contest, you couldnt be "posotive"...if you had a blood test!
—okay, weak though here
Only live with your mum and not your dad..... whats up you only love her?
You must have bad family problems....if you'd snitch on your own brother!
—1st line was wack, 2nd got it

overall – even though both verses were weak..
dumb-d-dumb took this one, came more consistent
in this battle, had harder punches, used personas (both)
flows were good & the flows were good,

Voted For: DAZZLE

diz wuz not a nice battl i relly wuznt feeling either verse but if u put a gun 2 my hed id vot fo DAZZLE becuz he had da moe creative linez an he used personalz