uppin... and yes i am battling limited edition....

This was feedback posted for OneStepBeyond
 

this was a decent verse....tht win though was kinda catchy...it was meh like u said

uppin this battle mayn

Voted For: Skriptz

OSB:

half of RV im sure they positively don't give a fuck what we spittin,
cuz half RV likes my shit, the other half knows 'skriptz' is 'prewritten',
^^decent 4/10
and i know prewritten punches are played, but hey, it makes perfect sense,
but when i 'post up' my verse you'll get 'clowned'like circus tents,
^^good meta 6/10
i bet you think battlin me that your the shit, and verses that yours is sick,
and your 'killer' skill is the equavalent to a motha fuckin low budget horror flick,
^^2nd line was forced but ok 3/10
i saw your past battles... wwwweeeeeaaaaakkkkk.... so this has to match,
only time im throwin you out a 'win though' is if theres gonna be shattered glass..*
^^good meta work on your structure 5/10

Overall: 18/40 (45%)

Skriptz:

You’re getting fooled all around…
…like some1 did a magic-trick
You say your punches are hard…
…but they’re looking like shit
^^Ok 4/10
Just leave RV…go on…just quit
You wish you had a dope crew…
…once newbs started leaving it
^^good bar 6/10
Cut your tongue off…
…spitting game is not your fame
Comparing wackness to you…
…there both the same
^^ok 4/10
Your styles & punches are wack…
…and so are you
& you’re only winning battles against newbs…
…cuz I had voted for you
^^ehh decent 5/10

Overall: 19/40 (48%)

Vote: Skriptz

Wack battle OSB almost had it if he would have dropped a better bar than his opener

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uppin this shit

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Voted For: OneStepBeyond

meh, i liked OSB's verse better, he attempted more complex punches, and they were more creative....skriptz, your stuff was just real basic, nothing to them really....comparing whackness line was good, but everything else was whack or too basic....no offense, but you dont seem to try anyone........onestep, nice stuff, laughed out loud at the horror movie one....and finisher was done...everything else was decent, but enough to take this one easily, keep up

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Voted For: OneStepBeyond

Vote=OneStep

the window line took it for one step..skriptz didnt really even throw a punch at him or contain any wordplay metas or multis shizzle was weak tho all around seen better from you one step

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Voted For: OneStepBeyond

yo i tink onestepbeyond won diz becauz not only wuz his punchez and da wordplay real good flowing an effective but diz skriptz dude had like 4 linez in ay line lyke wut da fukk is dat yo???????i know u said no shitty votez becuz of da structure, bit it iz da main reazon u lost yo itz jst horribl an da linez are less effective an creative cuz o like 4 linez in da verse u need ta doi linez lykje diz watch

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lyke dat iz yo, yo personalz wuz okay, not much originality in yo verse my mayn skriptz but onestep took diz for da better flow an harder punchlinez in hiz personals

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