uppin... .

Voted For: Adrenaline

vote adrenaline.........

you came a lttle tiny bit harder then flows.....
lyrics and wordplay..........both
structure ........................both
punches..........................adrenaline by a half an inch


good drop both of you though

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Ok...what happened to the votes...who cares....yo...uppin....it's 2-1

hell is gay?......Ok that's one more reason I dont wanna go there...lol

uppin...

Voted For: lyricalflowz

Adrenaline:

constipation?...hold strap while Im back with this contemplation
this nigga's wack,he couldn't 'rain' raps if his rhymes was 'in condensation'
^^decent 5/10
I got a sixth sense like bruce willis kid,ur literally blinded
cuz having toy-boats and tanks in dreams is the only way u'll be "military minded"
^^decent 5/10
my freestyle runs in 'waves' so you can say I got more 'flows' than you
and if u died and came 'back' then this kid would just get 'broke in two'
^^ehh 3/10
he thinks cuz he got a good 'record' then that shit wont get broken
but the only way he'd have a "spinning-disc" is if he was randomly chosen
^^ehh 4/10
this kid cant even 'cum' up with a good diss so dont believe him
he's just a dick, he prolly couldn't battle in real life when he 'see mens'
^^semen lines are played 2/10
this kid aint a 'prodigy',he just a 'shook one' and his voice is gay
the only way he could grasp some 'skills' is by lookin at my 'resume'
^^decent 6/10
this guy would never be a star,he was an accident since he came out
cuz the only 'flow' he ever had was at a jays game standin in the 'wave'~crowd
^^lol good bar 7/10
I spit the top-notch shit that stops time like pocket watches
and if u "watch diss" then stay away from my 'rocks' bitch...
^^ehh 4/10

Overall: 36/80 (45%)

LyricalFlowz:

I'll freeze this bitches heart so call me cold hearted
I'll slice your head vertically, youd think ya hairs parted
^^ehh 3/10
Hold up, dawg you know what? Your rhymes are fantastic!!!
You knew I was playing right? cuz even you said
^^good bar 6/10
Like porn stars that just get 'head' I'm fully 'blown'
Ya sig is almost right except your not a legend, your just unknown*
^^good personal 6/10
You make me puke, won't make it through the end just like Duke
only way your 'lyrics flow' is when ya 'write rhymes in alphebet soup'
^^ehh played concept 4/10
You and I are nothing alike, so we far from a synonym
I'll slice open your 'adrenal medulla' so you'll have no 'adrenaline'**
^^decent 5/10
Your rhymes are dead, they need fixin so take em' to the tool shed
Proof No crew wants you, just take a look at ya free agent thread**
^^good personal 6/10
You can drop 20 prewritten, and I'll still win with my 10 lines
Thinkin ya gonna beat me? then your really ahead of your time****
^^best bar 8/10

Overall: 38/70 (54%)

Vote: LyricalFlowz

Voted For: lyricalflowz

v/ lyricalflowz

Adrenaline - ya flow wasnt all there.......u used good vocab at most parts.........structure needs a lil work.........da punches were decent nothin too serious........nothin really should out except this one line....

this kid aint a 'prodigy',he just a 'shook one' and his voice is gay
the only way he could grasp some 'skills' is by lookin at my 'resume'

lyricalflowz - ya flow was on point, nice usage of personals.........ya punches werent hittin hard enough.........its a good thing dat u used alotta personals or adrenaline woulda took it........ya punches were soft, kinda played........but overall u had da better opener, and closer

RTF......any post u see up wit me name on it.......TY

u heard the man...he'll prolly take it but there's always next time...

Voted For: lyricalflowz

Lyrical- I liked how u flipped the old alphabet soup concept..was a fresh flip... adrenaline thing was coo... as was the 'sarcastic' personal.

Unknown- several of your similes missed they mark, imo... Condensation was coo...as was military minded... and resume was aiite... but... I just feel that Lyrical got the jump on u in this battle... cuz of his personals... n' like I said, somma those similes aren't very hardhitting...

Vote- Lyrical Flowz