^^^fam stop checkin da fukkin polls in all my battles dat shit is gettin gay

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Voted For: MaRVJay1009

so ima spray at dis broad...then leave layed in a dark hearse...
ur wack fam u like da "sneaker" no1 would pay 4 a "KON-verse"
^^^ Like da opener pretty thoughtful
let kon keep playin tuff ima have da snap dat clown's kneck..
i'll put my "nikes on ya spine" datz whut i call a "back ground CHECK"
^^^ha ha
ya roster weak i merked all dem whores in ya fagget team.....
u a criminal? no only time "FEDS came 2 ya house" u "ordered da magazine"
^^ HUH?
kon is really overrated..he like da rest all dez vets r see thru..
ima call u "john" now u not a "legend" u 1 of dem "ordinary ppl"
^^O.K
all i do dismantle men...marv? kon u know u cant handle him...
if i cum where u "from:" u'll be like dat "piston" cat u gon "R.i.P in hamilton"
^^^ Very nice closure very creative

marvjay1009- da opener was pretty creative and i liked it,nice punches throughout the whole verse. Heres sum stuff u need 2 work on....work on more word choice, elevate sum more and yo will be a pretty nice emcee. I liked all da disses and creativity u used throughout ur verse
overall 8.5/10

.K.onfliktz
This herb "hungry" fag Better Re-"boot", Cuz Kon'll turn ya kicks into "tim" "bits"..
lost the "weight Loss" lotto by a number,So jea You can say marv "missed" "fit"..
^^ Nice opener
"shootin Bars" like terminator, He "servin" free "shots" So Ima burn-dis-"weightor"..
Tries Flirtin wit "big" guys..but connects wit more "foot" "balls" then Oakland Raiders..
^^ lol very creative nice word choice
Kids the Nerd of rapverse...Have em surrounded by blue...like he Scrapped cops..
Why u makin Negative threads about Rv..when its in ya name...... in Cap Locks!!..
^^ Nice
Him havin money? thats a Nightmare..I see More bills Then the microsoft network..
Kidz gettin owned like Jersey At Miama...So you can consider this.."Net" "merked"..
^^basic
Blow Marv through his rooftop..have 'em runnin top of his house like a satelite dish..
Still hasnt matured yet..sh..betta watch my language......That Dude Marv is Ishhh
^^ average closure

.K.onfliktz
i liked ur verse as well
this was a very close battle
u had so many puches that were well thought off
i liked ur rhymes and word choice
no hate
u tried 2 fit alot of lyrics in one line which made the lines get crammed up a bit
work on fixin dat n u b str8

my v/marvjay1009

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dam niggaz is sleepin on dis shit hard

Voted For: MaRVJay1009

so ima spray at dis broad...then leave layed in a dark hearse...
ur wack fam u like da "sneaker" no1 would pay 4 a "KON-verse"
DOPE OPENER
et kon keep playin tuff ima have da snap dat clown's kneck..
i'll put my "nikes on ya spine" datz whut i call a "back ground CHECK
DOPE LINE
KONFLICTZ YOUR VERSE WAS HARD TO FOLLOW STRUCTURE WAS WAY OFF AND I WASNT FEELIN YOUR FLOW
U HAD GOOD LINES JUST WASNT FEELIN IT WHEN IT WAS TOGETHER SO VOTE =MARV

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Voted For: MaRVJay1009


Kon
This herb "hungry" fag Better Re-"boot", Cuz Kon'll turn ya kicks into "tim" "bits"..
lost the "weight Loss" lotto by a number,So jea You can say marv "missed" "fit"..
Decent opener, could have been worded better
"shootin Bars" like terminator, He "servin" free "shots" So Ima burn-dis-"weightor"..
Tries Flirtin wit "big" guys..but connects wit more "foot" "balls" then Oakland Raiders..
sorry not really feeling this
Kids the Nerd of rapverse...Have em surrounded by blue...like he Scrapped cops..
Why u makin Negative threads about Rv..when its in ya name...... in Cap Locks!!..
decent , could have been better
Him havin money? thats a Nightmare..I see More bills Then the microsoft network..
Kidz gettin owned like Jersey At Miama...So you can consider this.."Net" "merked"..
decent,
Blow Marv through his rooftop..have 'em runnin top of his house like a satelite dish..
Still hasnt matured yet..sh..betta watch my language......That Dude Marv is Ishhh
Sorry not feeling this

Marv
so ima spray at dis broad...then leave layed in a dark hearse...
ur wack fam u like da "sneaker" no1 would pay 4 a "KON-verse"
Decent Opener
let kon keep playin tuff ima have da snap dat clown's kneck..
i'll put my "nikes on ya spine" datz whut i call a "back ground CHECK"
Ha ,nice
ya roster weak i merked all dem whores in ya fagget team.....
u a criminal? no only time "FEDS came 2 ya house" u "ordered da magazine"
decent
kon is really overrated..he like da rest all dez vets r see thru..
ima call u "john" now u not a "legend" u 1 of dem "ordinary ppl"
Decent
all i do dismantle men...marv? kon u know u cant handle him...
if i cum where u "from:" u'll be like dat "piston" cat u gon "R.i.P in hamilton"
Okay closer , could have been better

overall this was an okay battle but ima have to give this one to Marv , to me he came harder , his punchlines were hitten harder and he had some okay personals , overalll keep it up both.but kon just didnt come hard enough ...Pz.

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