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MaRVJay 04-02-05 10:25 PM

Voted For: LyricalMa$tamind

.Mixtape:
You better watch what the fuck flies outta ya mouth...
Or I'ma hijack a plane and fly it into your house...
^^WEAK OPENER
Burn your apartment with your family tied to the couch...
And slit your throat, so when you scream, only blood comes out...
^^^DECENT PUNCH
I doubt that there could ever be...
A more wicked MC...
^^^NAH
Cuz AIDs infested child molesters aren't sicker than me...
Claim your on top and that your an MC...
^^^FIRST LINE WAS GOOD..SECOND WAS WEAK
Sorry kid, but thats just a dream that will never be your reality...
^^^?????
Also say your hard? Rugged and rough?..
Your just a joke, oh my god I call your fucking bluffs...
^^^WEAK
When you think you sold over 2 mil records, your think you mad the cut?..
That just shows over 2 million people are dumber than fuck...
^^^NOPE
So grab your pen and paper for one last time...
And create a freestyle that might actually rhyme
^^WEAK CLOSER...

mastamind:
Quickly I'll murk this gay, Put him in a plastic bag like hes purple haze
Ma$tamind will 'whip this bitch into shape,.........So basically he's 'Circle, K'
^^^^DIDN'T GET IT
Beatin me?, Whateva ur 'sniffin is false', Cuz every one 'Nose ur lying'
Cuz battlin me's a 'bad call',..Especially if I got my 'phone on silent'
^^^FIRST LINE WAS DOPE...SECOND WAS OKAY
U can try an get close, but .Mixtape,..U'll just die with your hopes
I mean c'mon now,...Your losses are gon be as high as my posts
^^^GOOD PUNCH
I'm stopping your files, Step in my shoes, And u'll be walking for miles
This kids 'garbage',... Just call me trash lid, Cuz I'm 'topping his style'
^^WHOO...HOTT SHIT
I'm ripping this lame hoe, Viciously 'reverse ok' an quickly give 'K-O's
Kids wack, He couldn't stop from loosing.. if he literally sway'd votes
^^FIRST LINE WAS HOTT...SECOND FUKKED IT UP
Son, Just surrender the match, We already know who the winner is fag
So why should I take your life,.. When text battling on the internet has
^^^LMAOOOO..FUNNY SHIT
I'm defeating this cunt, get off dis site,.. you da weakest of the bunch
He's fuckin horrible, I Felt so sorry for this bitch,...I PM'd him a punch
^^WEAK
So itz now safe ta say dat i murked dis chump.....like a mah fuckin lion does to itz prey for lunch
^^OKAY

NUFF SAID....MIXTAPE CAME REAL WEAK NO PERSONALS FROM EITHER OF YA'LL BUT MASTAMIND CAME WITH SOME CREATIVE SHIT SHIT...

RETURN DA FAVOR YA'LL LINKS R IN MY SIG..AND PLEEZ EXPLAIN YA SHIT LIKE I DID 4 YA'LL...1

Kid*Kapone 04-03-05 01:07 AM

This was feedback posted for LyricalMa$tamind
 
checkin pollz 4 mah guy.............................

LyricalMa$tamind 04-03-05 02:12 PM

thanx 4 da vote
still uppin come on n vote

Bangalore 04-03-05 05:17 PM

Voted For: LyricalMa$tamind

eh blah battle-

Lyrical- you had an alright verse your getting better in your spits.. your punches werent that bad and you had way better vocab...i liked your personals and shit i liked the "he's fuck'n horrible, i Felt so sorry for this bitch,...I PM'd him a punch ha that was actually sorta funny .. overall and alright verse work on your punches some more

Mix -um you need some work . i thought you could have done alot more with it. but anyways i'll break it down. you need work on your punches you had some alright stuff like the aids line that was a lil played but it was still good. work on your struct. diss on him more though you were talkin bout records and shit... uhh you got a lil lost . next time just stay on who your facing

Vote//lf for droppin a better verse

LyricalMa$tamind 04-03-05 05:30 PM

thax 4 da vote
still uppin dis shit

LyricalMa$tamind 04-03-05 08:31 PM

upppppppppppppiiiiiiiiiinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn 4
sum votes
please holla back

Kin*Ethicâ„¢ 04-03-05 08:44 PM

Voted For: LyricalMa$tamind

Flow: Blah
Punches: LyricalMa$tamind
Personals: LyricalMa$tamind
Wordplay: LyricalMa$tamind
Metas: LyricalMa$tamind
Multis: LyricalMa$tamind
Enjoyment: LyricalMa$tamind

Vote: LyricalMa$tamind

Explanation: LyricalMa$tamind got this pretty easily .. he actually came with a punch .. and mixtape was just blah nothign really hard hitting at all.......Stay Up Tho & Keep Elevating ...1

.LeFt. 04-04-05 12:26 AM

ok
 
uppin this thing.. n thanks for the vote shells...

LyricalMa$tamind 04-04-05 03:57 PM

uppin 4 sum votes

LyricalMa$tamind 04-04-05 08:05 PM

1 more vote
uppin dis battle

LyricalMa$tamind 04-05-05 06:09 PM

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LyricalMa$tamind 04-05-05 09:50 PM

upppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppp :thumbup: :thumbup: :

LyricalMa$tamind 04-06-05 06:55 PM

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LyricalMa$tamind 04-07-05 07:20 PM

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2Face 04-07-05 08:29 PM

This was feedback posted for LyricalMa$tamind
 
checkin the polls
aight just checkin


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